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by RainMan
Thu Nov 10, 2011 2:04 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Untitled
Replies: 6
Views: 1073

Re: Untitled

the fuck man? soulo : First I feel annoyed and bothered, I awoke from slumber to a world devoid of colors where people destroy each other and make it their choice to suffer ruckus: "I'm annoyed with all these days that are devoid of color/ People destroy each other like its our choice to suffer/" ht...
by RainMan
Fri Aug 27, 2010 3:30 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Flawless Rawness
Replies: 8
Views: 991

Re: Flawless Rawness

arrgh i wanna say this is another amazing drop from you 10/10

But i cant.

This just seems very mediocre to me.
The metaphores are very overused and the rhymes are so simple and i dont know about anyone else but i felt like the flow was quite choppy.

id have to say its a 7/10

You can do better
by RainMan
Mon Aug 23, 2010 3:47 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Futuristic Flow
Replies: 5
Views: 702

Re: Futuristic Flow

Its like a good version of a run-on sentance

Your flow never stops damnn

8/10

and its good to finally see some more stuff from you man
been a whillee
by RainMan
Fri Jul 16, 2010 5:41 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Beauty
Replies: 11
Views: 1188

Re: Beauty

Good job man you do more topics like this. You really shined in this

8/10

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by RainMan
Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:20 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: The Man's Story
Replies: 4
Views: 573

Re: The Man's Story

could you really grow a rose when all you're given is shit? Asian descent faced hatred by the hands of racists father died by peacemakers images I can't erase it watched my mother beaten by loan-sharks ever since I've kept my goals sharp, my dome smart ^That part really stood out for me, I honestly ...
by RainMan
Thu Jul 01, 2010 2:34 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Confuzzled
Replies: 8
Views: 1055

Re: Confuzzled

Jobe u aint nowhere near gonzos level duuude

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by RainMan
Tue Jun 29, 2010 7:36 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Confuzzled
Replies: 8
Views: 1055

Re: Confuzzled

"Gather my rhyme book and sell it to writers/ My lines swellin in size, call it elephantitis/" Best bar of the whole piece Again as usually it flowed near perfection and the content was great, I feel though like you really shine when you put emotions into your writtens instead of just raw lyricalnes...
by RainMan
Fri Jun 25, 2010 1:09 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Scrape
Replies: 5
Views: 708

Re: Scrape

I really like this drop gonzo, You can feel the stress behind it and the emotions, The unsureness of the future. Etc. As always flow is on point except for: Feel like I'm cornered, what more can I afford to lose/ And the weeks are long when there's nothin to adore or look forward to/ I felt like the...
by RainMan
Thu Jun 10, 2010 5:03 am
Forum: The Lounge
Topic: Most Hated 2010 - Mid Year
Replies: 8
Views: 1025

Re: Most Hated 2010 - Mid Year

Hazard and shady
by RainMan
Mon May 10, 2010 8:33 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Def's Poison (Dis ones for da Illest fam!)
Replies: 5
Views: 741

Re: Def's Poison (Dis ones for da Illest fam!)

Sorry man but this is garbage... I had a feeling it would be shit just from the opener "AYO. 100k in Coke!, 250k on da Benz Gettin high in sensation afta da car jackin, Den buyin Ice? Man...Dats priceless!" Please aquire a better taste in rappers, Cause clearly the shit you been listning to is pollu...
by RainMan
Tue Apr 27, 2010 10:08 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: You Cant Save Em All Part 1
Replies: 6
Views: 915

Re: You Cant Save Em All Part 1

Bumping this because i keep going back to this written everytime i go on illest

Bumping also because i want haze to see this and FUCKING FINISH IT GAHH
by RainMan
Thu Apr 15, 2010 2:27 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Battle Me
Replies: 6
Views: 1049

Re: Battle Me

Holy shit i almost missed this , Was buried in other scripts lol The flow was PERFECTION. But i feel as if you couldve done better. The punches just dont have anything special about them Overall id give this drop from YOU a 7/10 if someone else had wrote this id probably give them a 8-9 Its still am...
by RainMan
Mon Apr 05, 2010 10:36 am
Forum: The Lounge
Topic: Call Of Duty MW2
Replies: 17
Views: 1473

Re: Call Of Duty MW2

Bad company 2 is 10x better.
CoD mw 2 is full of faggoty little kids that talk shit. Pisses me teh fuck off ... since im not that good LOL

xboxlive - Rainman1344
by RainMan
Sat Apr 03, 2010 12:28 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Lame
Replies: 9
Views: 1096

Re: Lame

I dont know if im the only one that noticed this. but not alot of fresh shit in here, Most of its from your Big ass cypher drop a couple months back, and some cypher shit you did Not sayin its bad or anything, i was hopin for some brand new ruckus, Needles to say, their was some new stuff in their a...
by RainMan
Thu Mar 04, 2010 6:31 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Tipsy/ Tips
Replies: 4
Views: 666

Re: Tipsy/ Tips

Damn son I can write better and I'm just a fanboy.

But serious that was wack as hell, maybe would sound good as an intro or some shit..

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