the fuck man?


soulo :
First I feel annoyed and bothered,
I awoke from slumber to a world devoid of colors
where people destroy each other
and make it their choice to suffer

ruckus:


"I'm annoyed with all these days that are devoid of color/
People destroy each other like its our choice to ...

arrgh i wanna say this is another amazing drop from you 10/10

But i cant.

This just seems very mediocre to me.
The metaphores are very overused and the rhymes are so simple and i dont know about anyone else but i felt like the flow was quite choppy.

id have to say its a 7/10

You can do better

Its like a good version of a run-on sentance

Your flow never stops damnn

8/10

and its good to finally see some more stuff from you man
been a whillee

Good job man you do more topics like this. You really shined in this

8/10

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could you really grow a rose when all you're given is shit?
Asian descent faced hatred by the hands of racists
father died by peacemakers images I can't erase it
watched my mother beaten by loan-sharks
ever since I've kept my goals sharp, my dome smart

^That part really stood out for me, I ...

Jobe u aint nowhere near gonzos level duuude

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"Gather my rhyme book and sell it to writers/
My lines swellin in size, call it elephantitis/"

Best bar of the whole piece

Again as usually it flowed near perfection and the content was great,
I feel though like you really shine when you put emotions into your writtens instead of just raw ...

I really like this drop gonzo,
You can feel the stress behind it and the emotions, The unsureness of the future. Etc.

As always flow is on point except for:
Feel like I'm cornered, what more can I afford to lose/
And the weeks are long when there's nothin to adore or look forward to/


I felt like ...

Hazard and shady

Sorry man but this is garbage...

I had a feeling it would be shit just from the opener

"AYO.
100k in Coke!,
250k on da Benz
Gettin high in sensation afta da car jackin,
Den buyin Ice?
Man...Dats priceless!"


Please aquire a better taste in rappers, Cause clearly the shit you been listning to is ...

Bumping this because i keep going back to this written everytime i go on illest

Bumping also because i want haze to see this and FUCKING FINISH IT GAHH

Holy shit i almost missed this , Was buried in other scripts lol

The flow was PERFECTION.
But i feel as if you couldve done better.
The punches just dont have anything special about them

Overall id give this drop from YOU a 7/10

if someone else had wrote this id probably give them a 8-9




Its ...

Bad company 2 is 10x better.
CoD mw 2 is full of faggoty little kids that talk shit. Pisses me teh fuck off ... since im not that good LOL

xboxlive - Rainman1344

I dont know if im the only one that noticed this.
but not alot of fresh shit in here, Most of its from your Big ass cypher drop a couple months back, and some cypher shit you did

Not sayin its bad or anything, i was hopin for some brand new ruckus, Needles to say, their was some new stuff in their ...

Damn son I can write better and I'm just a fanboy.

But serious that was wack as hell, maybe would sound good as an intro or some shit..