i thought all white people thought Eminem is the best Rapper alive?

Oh wait he is....

And yea.. i agree.. just like i dont call u white Kids Crackers..
well that and cuz u didnt own any Slaves.. Crackers were the manz with the whip
tellin ya to work faster

i Mean Honestly I dont like it.

i see what u were aiming for ... but i think your Rhymes are too off..

i mean.. could just be me but i saw a few bars and had to wonder what was supposed to rhyme.

I can understand topics being hard on structure
and i can forgive minor misses on the Rhymes
But ...

Man Fuck this nigga
says hes lurkin the boards... but hes not replying or setting anything up...



starting to think hes all talk


Come on... Get at me

LOL Dog... i said these kids are funny or someshit yea.. i was talkin about all the people that were arguing on ur post not you.

But im down for What ever.... Set it up

Nice

Both came hard on this one here

Right fromt he first 2 bars i was Hooked and wanted to read it all

u both spit some fire




Will check ya next posts 4 sure

Mutual was right the Sink Line kills

Good punhes..
Complex word play

Over all Good SHIT

Last line is Fire TOO!!!!

a lil Something to Dice and eat you People Slowly...
Hi its nice to Meet you Im EvilJoey


Thats 7 syllables Rhymed with 7 syllables in the Next Line!
thats nice.. and a ...

not sure why you got slept on dog

I guess its cuz Deaths a sad subject and people tend to avoid things that make them think of sad shit.


Over all nice... hard to be overly complex when ur on a topic even more so on some Real life shit fo sho..

Over all flow was ok / rhymes were not too basic ...

yea i may be new but this guys annoying already

are u aware at how many trees will have to die if u ever decide to print this?



This shit was Nice tho Dog for sho

I meanz its sick as Hell


You won't even get coal, you'll get some carbon residue/
And I'm sorry if I spit bars that start upsetting you/
I'm a Martian, specialized in the art of ...

Wait dont get ur panties in a bunch...

Im just saying is you dont spit enough Bars of Fire...
U lack punchlines... Complex rhymes..

Long Long posts are Risky... most people get 4 bars into a verse and Know if they want to keep reading... if you dont have somethign that makes them keep reading ...

Fav line

I continue to Smoke pot even if its Damagin my Health...
Get Really Fucked up and Take ... Advantage of my self

WoW ... Just WoW

U kids R Funny

its A Racist rapper... that must like the taste of crackers
this Anti american dosnt know that Felons Shoot...
Get rode up on. what ever corner hes standin Sellin Fruit.
Ur like a Homo Yellin Faggot at 2 gays.
u should remeber Race and hate goes 2 ways.
Why do u post here? ur ignorance killed ur ...

I thought it was ok...
i mean u stayed on topic but the story lacked direction or i missed something

im not so good at stories... but this didnt make me intrested int he main character...

Lacked a few good punchlines to tie it all togeather i guess

Over all easy to read.. flow was ok..

Il ...

yea this wasnt bad
lil short.. good flow... over all not bad