[align=center]Speak my mind with plenty animosity towards enimies
Chosin' to be frozen when bullets rip in your vicinity
Duckin' and dodgin' cowarin' for cover in captivity
Cryin' like a bitch thinking' its mistaken identity
Unload tha clips and watch this bitch spit up like a new born
Swallow tha ...

No thoughts when I write, I just write my thoughts/
Never split tha sea for me ya know I just walk across/
So many have been lost when they cross tha coldest boss/
This northern light's bright shine down on a golden cross/
Like spoken frost, Ya minds frozen in chosen spots/
Leavin' ya bones to rot ...

Thanks man appreciated

no feed

So many reach for fame, and tears creep from strain/
Watchin' men bleed in vain, laid across seeds in rain/
Withered trees and grain, we teach appease tha pain/
Steadily seekin' reign, only for those who speak with feign/
These are tha truest thangs, really hard to explain/
Atrocities inhumane ...

Tha last breathe of air escapes from your fallen collapsed chest/
Bodies layed to rest, souls journey begins, long arduous quest/
Some have been blessed, gates of heaven open up light at tha crest /
Others digress, damned to be Satan's army possessed/
While livin' have wept, angels guidance cryin ...

Thanks man appericate tha feed.

Somethin' me and another dude workin' on for another site. Feedback is welcome



Teachings are beliefs written through someone else's eyes/
But who are tha ones to teach when written through countless lies/
This mounts to times, when we are tha ones commitin' conscious crimes/
Rippin' through ...

^^^^^^
agree'd and I quote "absolutely no extensions will be given"

thats bullshit and not fair.

This bitch skills are weak and it shows in everyone of your ryhmes/
Name one time ya dropped a dime without over extendin' your lines/
False context in every one of your lies, complex truth and he dies/
Stayin' here to redesign and refine consorted emcees smellin' like swine/
Verses malign… and ...

Okay since i'm new here, Iwanna get this right cuz other places is differnt.
1 bar = 1 line
or
1 bar = 2 lines

Ne 1

16 lines
house rules

I'm a rookie so go ez on me!

Even though I haven't got a battle yet, I'm always down for a tourny!

What's up ya'll new to tha site

Heres a verse for ya'll

Sometimes it feels like in life I can never succeed/
Indeed, these are tha things that control me to believe/
That is it really worth for my lungs to let me breath/
Oxygen deprivation won't ever let it release/
Full of mistrials and wrong ...

Keyboards tell tha tails of rythems, while my gun tells tha tails of victems//
Scriptures written with my visions, locked down and kept blind in tha systems//
Provoke tha soul with massive wisdom, don't condon indecisive descions//
Lackin' thoughts to make personal revisions, conquer all downfall ...