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by Def-init
Sat Jan 21, 2012 3:59 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Ambition
Replies: 11
Views: 1754

Re: Ambition

"Disappeared.. they're like wheres whats his Name I wonder I'm Thinking a little different now.. Blame the hunger Sedated..chilling.. its Pain I'm Under Could teach you how to get in good shape, Like I'm Training runners In deep thought when It rains and thunders" Dope. Feelin that poetic vibe mang....
by Def-init
Sat Jan 21, 2012 3:56 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Freestyle
Replies: 6
Views: 1432

Re: Freestyle

multis, substance, flow. all on point. even more so considering its a free style!!
Nice work budz!
by Def-init
Sat Jan 21, 2012 3:48 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Enlightend Rhyme
Replies: 3
Views: 886

Re: Enlightend Rhyme

Thx for the feed,
Ya, my style is more poetic. Always has been.

Life been on the go mang.
But for sure budz, I shall leave some feeds.
by Def-init
Sat Jan 21, 2012 3:47 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: ugly on the inside
Replies: 11
Views: 1681

Re: ugly on the inside

Ill, Multies was off the hook! I dug the substance, "and yet i still would never harm ya, everyone left you when you left me cuz i left it all to karma.. and fuck ya drama, my love you couldnt understand it, so you stayed candid, did your damage took advantage and you planned it, and even when i ram...
by Def-init
Sat Jan 21, 2012 3:44 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: From Nothing To Something, ft.khan verse
Replies: 9
Views: 1502

Re: From Nothing To Something, ft.khan verse

Hrmmm
at first glance I was like. Plex is gonna kill this. Which you did as usual.
Much respect as an artist mang.
But damn Khan. Shit was vibrant, unreal. An atom combustin for sure.

Id give each of you my fav quote from ur respective verses... but the whole piece is a quotable...

Sic, fam.!
by Def-init
Sat Jan 21, 2012 3:39 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: The Nightmare after Christmas
Replies: 12
Views: 1678

Re: The Nightmare after Christmas

..........was skimming through some pieces and this came across the scanner.
I had to do a triple take on this piece of art.
Wow. It blended well. Crazy even.
"Tips His Hat"
by Def-init
Sat Jan 21, 2012 3:37 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: The Warm Up
Replies: 9
Views: 1337

Re: The Warm Up

"I'm a goddamn fiend for beef, y'all better bring the lube mate, on these nuts like you're eating tube steak Don't step to a true great who's schooled ranks back when you were still in your drool stage And in diapers that carried your stool's weight, I'm the fucking power source who's skill towers y...
by Def-init
Sat Jan 21, 2012 3:35 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Broken Water (life Stories Vol. 3)
Replies: 7
Views: 1319

Re: Broken Water (life Stories Vol. 3)

Yo, I can relate to this piece.
It really hits home for me mang.
Can picture it over some southern beats with a nice cello mix.
Two thumbs up.
by Def-init
Sat Jan 21, 2012 3:32 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Lost..
Replies: 4
Views: 1027

Re: Lost..

"swam from the deepest of feelings to surface found purpose in parts she found worthless a little belly where no longer birth lives pipes bursted and time became more observant her eyes show hope when she used to curse it her pain worsened and she needed an exit as we set in, cover ourselves in the ...
by Def-init
Sat Jan 21, 2012 3:30 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Rate This Slut
Replies: 9
Views: 1302

Re: Rate This Slut

This ish made me laugh fo'real.
Sic flow, substance was bonkers!

Uppin Mang!
by Def-init
Wed Jan 18, 2012 3:47 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Enlightend Rhyme
Replies: 3
Views: 886

Enlightend Rhyme

As the horizon shines from the subsiding tides, my mind rises upon the isles of time! While they Slip away, the stars, the days. Stripes sway, behind bars, the shame. My days, lay this way. At night, dismay. The rage stays. In sight, my way. Understand... Tossin cigar bands, gettin cash in hand, an...
by Def-init
Fri Dec 30, 2011 4:35 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Demonic Enigma
Replies: 7
Views: 1231

Re: Demonic Enigma

This was pretty cool...the flow was kind of wacky..but the use of your vocab made up for any doubt this was good..this actually seemed like a poetic epic when it started coming across certain angles...made it enjoyable for the most part...nice drop my dude Im glad you enjoyed it. "Poetic Epic" Was ...
by Def-init
Mon Dec 26, 2011 12:54 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Demonic Enigma
Replies: 7
Views: 1231

Re: Demonic Enigma

I'm digging the crazy rhyme schemes and nice use of vocab here. The only line I didn't really like was the Hell of a guy pun. Felt a little goofy and out of place compared to the rest of the drop. To be honest man. I almost removed that bar you mentioned. I was lifted as hell when I wrote this, so ...
by Def-init
Wed Dec 21, 2011 1:25 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Demonic Enigma
Replies: 7
Views: 1231

Re: Demonic Enigma

Thx for the feed.
I made this in an unorthodox way with a strong emphasis on the poetic vibe.
Nonetheless, I'm glad you enjoyed it all.
by Def-init
Mon Dec 19, 2011 3:31 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: !!!! TheOneYouHate Diss !!!! Straight Bodied !!!!
Replies: 40
Views: 4614

Re: !!!! TheOneYouHate Diss !!!! Straight Bodied !!!!

Holy fuck man. Straight murder.
That was some fuckin funny ass shit.
Personals all over the place.
Dude you totally "Got R Done"

Nice.

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