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as stated previously


10 lines, due this weekend if needed.
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you said go hard but i keyed it instead. sorry



You cant fight WHOS THIS GUY KIDDING? coming at AnTi youll LOSE YA LIFE LISTEN!...
I own the battle ring and wont hesitate to "Pop Cyanide" like a SUICIDE MISSION!!...
your FEUDAL RHYME SPITTIN is the REASON YOURE WACK AT THIS...
It Aint nothing for me to put a Stop to Syn(Sin) just call me JESUS OF NAZAREATH!...
I could BEAT EM WITH HALF A SCRIPT! but for a FAG YA AWFULLY BRAVE...
ill show my support at ya show when i come there just to SMACK YOU OFF THE STAGE!...
Ill SLASH HIS HEART AND FACE! against me your TIGHTEST RHYMES SHATTER...
Even if you were a Proffesor doing physics test u still couldnt CYANIDE-MATTER!...
youll get SODOMIZED BASTARD! i havent begun to show the BEAST WITH-IN...
You a FAKE! Watching underground Artists you still wouldnt SEE KID SIN(syn)...


Couple expos:
cyanide was used as a suicide pill.
hes doing a show(cyanide-matter or poison me)
Kid sin is an underground rapper, and "sin as in be bad"


i really hate doing expos btw.

oh real talk i wrote this b4 u posted lol had tha same concept

cyanide syn jus tryin me is suicide/
beat rappers worse then tha man they had curcified/
14-1 is wat u consider a factor/
i guess murder tha only way 2 c if anti matter?
thought ud kno better better brush up on ya bible/
cuz syn bad 4 ya soul health n ya survival/
u tryna tempt hell is that wat u into/
look u dnt want beef like ur religion was hindu/
i could keep goin but dnt worry relax kid/
cuz anti dnt matter jus sumthin 4 practice/

You cant fight WHOS THIS GUY KIDDING? coming at AnTi youll LOSE YA LIFE LISTEN!...
I own the battle ring and wont hesitate to "Pop Cyanide" like a SUICIDE MISSION!!...

Alright… nice way to start off the opening gambit


your FEUDAL RHYME SPITTIN is the REASON YOURE WACK AT THIS...
It Aint nothing for me to put a Stop to Syn(Sin) just call me JESUS OF NAZAREATH!...

This was alright, just a lot of wording, could cut it down a bit for better delivery


I could BEAT EM WITH HALF A SCRIPT! but for a FAG YA AWFULLY BRAVE...
ill show my support at ya show when i come there just to SMACK YOU OFF THE STAGE!...

Ehh… filler

Ill SLASH HIS HEART AND FACE! against me your TIGHTEST RHYMES SHATTER...
Even if you were a Proffesor doing physics test u still couldnt CYANIDE-MATTER!...

Dopest bar of the whole battle

youll get SODOMIZED BASTARD! i havent begun to show the BEAST WITH-IN...
You a FAKE! Watching underground Artists you still wouldnt SEE KID SIN(syn)...

Ehh… mediocre


+ Your Strongest Bar:
Ill SLASH HIS HEART AND FACE! against me your TIGHTEST RHYMES SHATTER...
Even if you were a Proffesor doing physics test u still couldnt CYANIDE-MATTER!...

- Weakest Bar:
I could BEAT EM WITH HALF A SCRIPT! but for a FAG YA AWFULLY BRAVE...
ill show my support at ya show when i come there just to SMACK YOU OFF THE STAGE!...

Flow: 4/5
Multi Usage: 5/5
Content: 3.5/5

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cyanide syn jus tryin me is suicide/
beat rappers worse then tha man they had curcified/

Looks like a play to Anti’s bar, and you posted second? Kind of suspicious

14-1 is wat u consider a factor/
i guess murder tha only way 2 c if anti matter?

Eh… I’m sure this is a played line for Anti’s name already

thought ud kno better better brush up on ya bible/
cuz syn bad 4 ya soul health n ya survival/

Nice flow and religious pun’

u tryna tempt hell is that wat u into/
look u dnt want beef like ur religion was hindu/

Alright you’re finally warming up

i could keep goin but dnt worry relax kid/
cuz anti dnt matter jus sumthin 4 practice/

Weak finisher, I was expecting a lot more for a closer.

Flow: 2.5
Multi-Usage: 2.0
Content: 2.0

(FINAL THESIS)
Anti was coming for your head at the opening gambit, he didn’t let off for the whole battle. His content became stronger as he continued throughout his verse. Syn, you started off very weak, and you continued to remain the weaker of the two MC’s throughout your whole verse, kind of like you didn’t put too much thought into it. Towards the end you started to grow stronger with flow, but your punch-lines didn’t really effect or damage Anti’ directly, this battle was definitely one sided, I’m giving this to Anti’.

Punchlines - AntiMaTTer - His were wittier, more effective, and set up better.
Multies - AntiMaTTer
Flow - AntiMaTTer
Nameplay - AntiMaTTer - 4 of his 5 bars were name plays. he did it well though. cyanidesyn had some too, but it didn't have the effectiveness that AntiMatter's had.
Personals - NA
Creativity - AntiMaTTer

Overall, it seems cyanidesyn didn't try very hard ? I'm not sure. Judging by his audios and other texts, I just think he can do better.

My vote goes to AntiMaTTer.

wow....

Anti i should smack you for battling this kid... seriously...

but...

Anti really nothin i can say bad about your verse... kinda drug out here...

"Ill SLASH HIS HEART AND FACE! against me your TIGHTEST RHYMES SHATTER...
Even if you were a Proffesor doing physics test u still couldnt CYANIDE-MATTER!..."

think you were lookin for a filler...

thats just me tho it was cool but damn.... why you callin out newbs bro? you're like WAY above that man...

OH and if you don't like explaining your bars then don't make em so people can't understand em... or just let people figure it out...

okay Cyanide

yeah you need a lot of work man... even tho i give you props for holding your own against a heavy weight... i kinda felt like how Anti posted his verse and said something about Jesus... you took you're verse and tried to make a big ass flip on it... and it just didn't work... either you wrote it after Anti posted or before he did... and it was just coincidence... i dunno..

hit up the Center Of Elevation...

thats at the bottom of the main page... just in case you can't find it...

Punches - Anti
Multies - Anti
Flow - Anti
Nameplay - Anti
Personals -Neither
Creativity - Anti

Anti with a cat sweep except for personals...

next time man why dont' you battle someone on YOUR level... just sayin bro...

Anti Wins

-battle closed records updated-