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Its ya funeral service quix


Watch me kill Quix man he gonna gon get hit slam
A Jadakiss fan? I refuse to be sink by quick sand (Quix hand)
I’m lawless… flawless you breakin ya punches leave you Arm Less
Then destroy Q’s body got lil kids saying their alphabet P.R.S (Plastic Recovering Surgery)
U can’t explode like dud like common q U gotta lay Low
While E.M.T.U explode Breaking ya limbs like forest Tornado
Ya brains leaking skull left open like door gross and gore
And ya brains crushed up look like food was thrown on floor
U gon win from 86 to 87 and still Peaking
Cause I’m a newbie oh yea The line before this I was sarcastically speaking

haha, ok mah man...Lightwork!

I'm sort of a big deal here...and I've styled on kids like you and have defeated plenty dudes!!
so if you Tempt me too, i'll slice your throat and suspend you by both ankles and really fucking EM-T-U (empty you)

i offend these newbs when i drop a verse or key ... watch him lie and claim he's never Heard of Me
but i'll purposley 'alter his body with the steal' faster than plastic Surgery

he's just another Jerk to beat ... you ain't hard at all, i mean this kids Emo!!
thinking you can beat me up...how when he doesn't 'Throw shit, and just runs' ... like Tim Teebow

come on, who really thinks that this kids worthy? no metaphors, plus your scripts nerdy
Quix dirty!! i got this battle in the bag ... 'hands down' like SIX-THIRTY

i could beat on my worst day!! i'm a put a 'hole in black' ... your just another notch on my belt
handing out losses and welts ... i'll tell you to your face i'm not 'impressed with your wrapping' like bosses of Elfs


shaking off the rust

UPPIN FOR VOTES

Cat sweep.. HOVT Quix..

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GhoStWriDa001 wrote:Cat sweep.. HOVT Quix..

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briefly explain y ur vote was for quix...lookin for vets to vote cuz im not acceptin the "i vote quix" kinda votes EXPLAINNN! so both can excel

Quix had multis, punches, and stood out.. You need lot more work.. But you do get a A for effort.. That is all, son.. Good day..

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ok battle...

really one-sided...Quix had everything in his bars...dope nameplay,wordplay,punches,creativity,multi's...everything...

emtu you need to work on your structure...punches were basic as was your attempt at nameplay...but good try tho...

MVGT=Quix

Watch me kill Quix man he gonna gon get hit slam
A Jadakiss fan? I refuse to be sink by quick sand (Quix hand)
(multies is there,not to strong of a bar)
I’m lawless… flawless you breakin ya punches leave you Arm Less
Then destroy Q’s body got lil kids saying their alphabet P.R.S (Plastic Recovering Surgery)
(the explaining should be after the verse but this was ighttt)
U can’t explode like dud like common q U gotta lay Low
While E.M.T.U explode Breaking ya limbs like forest Tornado
(not bad)
Ya brains leaking skull left open like door gross and gore
And ya brains crushed up look like food was thrown on floor
(ehhhhhh not really feelin its average at best)
U gon win from 86 to 87 and still Peaking
Cause I’m a newbie oh yea The line before this I was sarcastically speaking
(nahh)

vs


I'm sort of a big deal here...and I've styled on kids like you and have defeated plenty dudes!!
so if you Tempt me too, i'll slice your throat and suspend you by both ankles and really fucking EM-T-U (empty you)
(NICE)

i offend these newbs when i drop a verse or key ... watch him lie and claim he's never Heard of Me
but i'll purposley 'alter his body with the steal' faster than plastic Surgery
(not badd)

he's just another Jerk to beat ... you ain't hard at all, i mean this kids Emo!!
thinking you can beat me up...how when he doesn't 'Throw shit, and just runs' ... like Tim Teebow
(ightttt bar)
come on, who really thinks that this kids worthy? no metaphors, plus your scripts nerdy
Quix dirty!! i got this battle in the bag ... 'hands down' like SIX-THIRTY
(kind of personal,goodshit)

i could beat on my worst day!! i'm a put a 'hole in black' ... your just another notch on my belt
handing out losses and welts ... i'll tell you to your face i'm not 'impressed with your wrapping' like bosses of Elfs
(hell yea nice)

quix just is more experienced at battling he had the lil personals,the punches,they both had multies,i might say a tie on that,and flow,but quix had everything else here,not a bad battle at the end of the day
MVGT QUIX

Don't know if your counting those votes, but just incase i'll wrap this up.

Punches: Quix
Personals: Quix
Wordplay: Quix
Flow: Tie
Structure: I suppose Emtu
Multies: Quix

Overall Quix had more to offer in most departments, a few punches and personals that were aimed directly at emtu. Emtu you had an ok verse, and seem to be improving which is good to see, keep practicing on the punchlines and making them hit harder.
Either way i think Quix had more about him in this battle.

Vote - Quix

4-0 Q .. or 3-0 Q if you dissallow ghosts votes. Either way

QUIX = Win. Close and update please

QUIX WINS VIA KO... CLOSED, UPDATED