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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 7:31 am
by Munteskue_lol
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Re: Catch22- V's
Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 8:32 am
by DaPrince
This was sick bro. It was a uniquely done in that you stuck with 1 letter versus the traditional alphabet or numbered list and I enjoyed that. I liked the imagery that developed throughout it also and I didn't see that ending coming. I'd definitely wanna hear this an audio.
Re: Catch22- V's
Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 2:08 am
by aLb
"violently violate a virgin after a fake vasectomy" - HA!
Re: Catch22- V's
Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 10:43 am
by Haz
Vindictively worked to become a valedictorian
my salary's sorta been a vision of vindication
workin hard in college so I can take a videlicet vacation
Stand Out Point.
Def Elevated from your days of Shitty lyrics
I'd say this is Good, U show A lot of potential,
Just keep working at it, even go back N make this smoother
eitherway cool piece
Keep Dropping
Re: Catch22- V's
Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2010 6:23 pm
by The Man
Good stuff, don't know what the retard above me means, you've always been pretty decent, just lazy at times.