My Hunger Lives

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My Hunger Lives

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I Hunger To Satisfy My Honor Like Samurais
This Drama wont Subside, So I Battle The Rising Tide
If I Could Wield This Mic Like A Tempered Blade
I Would Seal Its Might In A Recorded Tape
To Feel Is Great, But In The Eyes Of Apes
Them Feelings Make, For A Life Of Hate
To Strive Negates The Strife In Place
But The Wise Placate, The Eyes Of Faith
The Lies Relate To The Truths Escape
Mirages Placed On Paths Ta Open Gates
Grasp At Yer Hope And Prey The Fog Does Stay (Prey/Pray)
So you Can Crawl Your Way Thru A Cloudy Day
Head Down, Run The Race But All It Takes
Is A Look Its Way, For The Rays To Warm Ya Face

Minds Visualize Success Or Demize Like Kriptonite
The Signs Provide N Impress In Life Ya Strength N Drive
Either A Willing Pride Or A Flailing Dive Progress The Idle
No Ill In Eyes That View The Signs Of Strengh In Survival
Brain Cells Let Me Free, Bars I Used To Escape Fantasy
In Hell I Could Be, Hard Ta Belive Id Still Live Lavishly
Brandishing, Calamity In Realitys Trajedies While At Piece
Spread belief Like Profecies Spoke By Majesties In History
Never Following, Paving Streets Toward Dreams Subconciously
Still Hauntin Me, Like Freddy On Holloween I Still Cant Sleep
Investing What I Sow, So I Could Reap And End Up Profiting
Never Sold My Soul, So When I Speak No One Doubts My Profecy
On A Conquest Sea My Traveling Like Christopher Discovering
My aSail' Ants "Up A Push Toward My Destiny, They Driving Me
While Im Thriving Like Society Discovering Modern Technologies
I Cross The Sea's Of Hate n Pain Riding Atop A Cresting Wave
Scratched n Scaved, Ill Find My Resting Place A Man Thats Made
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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man this was dope man, as a whole drop, i mean that beginning few bars started off fairly well kicked the mutlies in and the vocab and had a relaxed flow to it, but then that second addition was dopeness i was feeling it well the majority of it anyway i'm just droppin quick feed sorry i couldnt go into detail but i'll lookin forward to our collab man with shit like this
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Oh For Sure Man.. Thanks For The Peep Bro
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Damn Flip, this is real ill. U gotta get to recording audio drops more often. I've only heard a couple of your audio pieces, but when I read this it is easy to hear how it'd match up real nice with your delivery style. U got all sorts of nice concepts in here, this'd be the kind of audio track I'd listen to a lot to contemplate the words.
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I Hunger To Satisfy My Honor Like Samurais
This Drama wont Subside, So I Battle The Rising Tide
If I Could Wield This Mic Like A Tempered Blade
I Would Seal Its Might In A Recorded Tape
UH SON I'M FEELING THIS!!

Minds Visualize Success Or Demize Like Kriptonite
The Signs Provide N Impress In Life Ya Strength N Drive
this is clean, easy to read and follow in my head

Never Following, Paving Streets Toward Dreams Subconciously
Still Hauntin Me, Like Freddy On Holloween I Still Cant Sleep
Investing What I Sow, So I Could Reap And End Up Profiting
Never Sold My Soul, So When I Speak No One Doubts My Profecy
On A Conquest Sea My Traveling Like Christopher Discovering
My aSail' Ants "Up A Push Toward My Destiny, They Driving Me
While Im Thriving Like Society Discovering Modern Technologies
I Cross The Sea's Of Hate n Pain Riding Atop A Cresting Wave
Scratched n Scaved, Ill Find My Resting Place A Man Thats Made
this whole part right here I think i like the most. good shit man keep em coming, gettin better and better
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