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I Steal Lyrics

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Sometimes I sit and wonder if everything that created me will be satisfied by all that I create
It leaves me fixated I... get faded 'til I don't care anymore, I stare at the floor from the ceiling- more appealin' than kneelin' to a God I don't believe in and powerful people can deceive you...

Till you don't believe that this country was stolen from those who owned it
Turned totem poles to homeless broken souls cuz...
Mothafuckahs are greedy leaving... families needy
Kids spray grafitti and smoke weed
I break laws like y'all broke treaties
So don't treat me like a different species

Very Impactful

Cause i used to smoke weed till my eyes were sore and.. Some of y'all don't even believe in dinosaurs
There was a time before this was ours
Before there were- roads and cars and our mini ipods
And I.. came to being from nothin to breathin
And maybe theres nothin but being human, then there's nothin at all
I find it.. hard to comprehend and end to beginning
See I was born a Christian, but I got a habit for sinnin
And I don't know if Jesus can see us or if Islams the truth
See me rippin out bible pages twistin Buddha with intelligent youth
I'll... prove to y'all that I was tellin the truth
Cause.. kids in the ghetto turn to felons and troops
Either locked in cages or cockin gages
I be lookin up to the sky hopin God saves us
And I feel.. sadder than ever from the cloud scattered weather or the act of the measure I be actin whatever and.. crackin a beverage while I'll rappin the treble neva let you discover because I'm STILL undercover

Great

Enough of the shields, and to keep it real
I don't give a fuck what you think..
I let sink in your heart
Like a kiss in the dark
Touchin my head while you pick me a part
I used to.. sit in the park, now I'm sittin cozy
You don't know me, or the woman that made my soul be
I spit this verse that's writ while I'm drinkin O-E
And I curse and spit with some stupid homies

While.. y'all talk politics sippin a latte
You be.. bridgin the gap, but you missin the walkway
People dyin on battle fields while I'm yellin at churches
You be fighting these wars just to tell me my purpose?

It's worthless..
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See I was born a Christian, but I got a habit for sinnin
And I don't know if Jesus can see us or if Islams the truth
See me rippin out bible pages twistin Buddha with intelligent youth
I'll... prove to y'all that I was tellin the truth
Cause.. kids in the ghetto turn to felons and troops
Either locked in cages or cockin gages
I be lookin up to the sky hopin God saves us
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Re: T.P. - Written Drop

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yeah this didnt start too great but as it got further on i started to pick up on it my fave part was stated above ^^ this was a fairly good read coulda been made better but i enjoyed it well done Catch keep droppin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Catch22 wrote:Sometimes I sit and wonder if everything that created me will be satisfied by all that I create
It leaves me fixated I... get faded 'til I don't care anymore, I stare at the floor from the ceiling- more appealin' than kneelin' to a God I don't believe in and powerful people can deceive you...

Till you don't believe that this country was stolen from those who owned it
Turned totem poles to homeless broken souls cuz...
Mothafuckahs are greedy leaving... families needy
Kids spray grafitti and smoke weed
I break laws like y'all broke treaties
So don't treat me like a different species

Very Impactful

Cause i used to smoke weed till my eyes were sore and.. Some of y'all don't even believe in dinosaurs
There was a time before this was ours
Before there were- roads and cars and our mini ipods
And I.. came to being from nothin to breathin
And maybe theres nothin but being human, then there's nothin at all
I find it.. hard to comprehend and end to beginning
See I was born a Christian, but I got a habit for sinnin
And I don't know if Jesus can see us or if Islams the truth
See me rippin out bible pages twistin Buddha with intelligent youth
I'll... prove to y'all that I was tellin the truth
Cause.. kids in the ghetto turn to felons and troops
Either locked in cages or cockin gages
I be lookin up to the sky hopin God saves us
And I feel.. sadder than ever from the cloud scattered weather or the act of the measure I be actin whatever and.. crackin a beverage while I'll rappin the treble neva let you discover because I'm STILL undercover

Great

Enough of the shields, and to keep it real
I don't give a fuck what you think..
I let sink in your heart
Like a kiss in the dark
Touchin my head while you pick me a part
I used to.. sit in the park, now I'm sittin cozy
You don't know me, or the woman that made my soul be
I spit this verse that's writ while I'm drinkin O-E
And I curse and spit with some stupid homies

While.. y'all talk politics sippin a latte
You be.. bridgin the gap, but you missin the walkway
People dyin on battle fields while I'm yellin at churches
You be fighting these wars just to tell me my purpose?

It's worthless..
Everything besides the middle verse is pretty much trash. The middle verse is close to perfection for that kind of verse, I kind of wonder where that inspiration came for it, it was just exceptional, with very few flaws.

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Re: T.P. - Written Drop

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Inspired by a Blue Scholars song that I heard recently

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And I don't know if Jesus can see us or if Islams the truth
See me rippin out bible pages twistin Buddha with intelligent youth
Eeeeeeee.... that line was hot...but like plex said the middle most def was an impact player... It looks like a release piece to me...nice overall tho
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Post by eMCee Havic »

good read my dude i liked the beginin an middle part the most



break laws like y'all broke treaties
So don't treat me like a different species
Cause i used to smoke weed till my eyes were sore and.. Some of y'all don't even believe in dinosaurs
There was a time before this was ours
Before there were- roads and cars and our mini ipods
And I.. came to being from nothin to breathin


good elevation, i'm enjoyin readin your shit, flow was bouncy is all i have to critique
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you should be afraid of all the people in the streets

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Rugged Eros wrote:
I'll... prove to y'all that I was tellin the truth
Cause.. kids in the ghetto turn to felons and troops
Either locked in cages or cockin gages
I be lookin up to the sky hopin God saves us

This was pretty good, once again like some of the other pieces I've dropped on, it doesn't have a Jim Jones flow, you're not trying to role play in a gang environment, you came with some open minded substance, had a few good multi's, liked the confidence you had to put your questions towards religion out there, a lot of people seem scared to speak out on religion, I think a lot of rappers in the game claim Islam or Christianity simply for the fact of sales, they don't believe in their religion, but they claim so they can get some units moved, same thing with politicians and elections, "I'm a christian, vote for me!".
Agreed.

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this was purdy nice, looks like someone is uppin' there game
a nice drop once again, got that fluid type flow to it
keep it up man you comin' up fast.....spaceship

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Re: T.P. - Written Drop

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Wow, fakeeeeeeeeeeeee.

He stole the lyrics and changed it a little. This is actually the song "Knowmads-Pick Me Apart".

-- Tue Dec 14, 2010 10:00 am --

Damn. lol

Well, it's wierd because Pick Me Apart was made 2 years ago and his post wasn't that long ago. Plus, like he leaves out a few verses from the original and changes a crap load of words. But, maybe it is Tom Pepe.

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I personally think dick is f'n delicious, if you put some milk and frosted flakes on a dick, I promise it'll be the best breakfast you ever had, talk about a grand slam. But on the real people, I've been using different screen names to account for the lack of having real life friendships. :doh: I'm sorry for being a pathetic loser, I will do better in the future when trying to hide my IP's and steal shit from rappers.

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I don't know why he deleted it when you can just read it on Plex's comment. Plus word from the big boys is he is linked to the same IP as Knowmads, Pied Cypher & Indefinite (could be even more). Someone should contact the real Knowmads and see if they are in any way affiliated with this site. This kid might of been posing as them the whole time.

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Original post edited back in + post locked so it cannot be further re-edited.

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Shitty, these lyrics are straight stolen. Damn...
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I'm Catch 22.
Pied Cypher.
Young Jobe.
Fake Knowmad account.
Indefinite.
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