Demon Vs Ambition

[LogiK]

4 Bars
Due in 24 hours after both check in.

-- Thu Feb 18, 2010 9:02 pm --

Here's My Check.

[Haz]

Check.

-- Fri Feb 19, 2010 7:11 pm --

This Is a Arena You Shouldn't Tour,it'll rattle ya Puddin Core
1 Round?? You Remain Under Rugged Like Aynt Enough Material 4 Wooden Floors

Its Seeming Like This'll Be Crucial Kid
Your Pops a Molesta, Explains How Blood Shot ya Pupil Is

Reroute ya Tracks Like BMX Cheaters, I Got Squeeze Ya Neck Fever
Your Already 1-1 U'll Always Need 'Sis Co' Like a DMX Feature..

I Slayed The Glitch Left needles of Gold Across His Stitchd Chest
Like i Deleted all contacts It Took a Big Mes' To Clean Out This Bitch Text..

Your Acting Selfish Cause Your Wack n Helpliss Ur Act is Velvet
Treat ya Crew Head First Never Attach To Helmets Stuck On Q Tip Like Ear Wax has Melted

If Vocally your the Champ i'll put a Belt Ta ya Neck
Yall just Seen Demon go Down .. JESUS What The Fuck Else ya Expect??

[LogiK]

You The Worse Veteran Bro, & With Textin u Blow, Watch My Bar Rock Ambition Like The Presidents Goals!
Quix Was Wreckin This Hoe, u Ain Hard Or ill, Q Got This Dummy On His Nuts Like Retarded Squrriles
All My Bars Is ill, Man I'm Wreck'n This Newbie, Only Time Duke a Hazard? Was In Jessicas Movie!
Learn a Lesson ya Groupie...Once The Toys Gripped? I'd Send Ya Ass Higher Then Ushers Voice Pitch!
This Lil Boy Ripped, Man im Rapin His Verse! Only Time ull Beat Demon? Is If u Prayin in Church!
Demons Rapin This Nerd! I'ma Vet So Strong, Vs Me? u "Beat Quicker" Then Some Techno Songs!
Nothin u Rep Is Strong! & u Ass With Keys, u Could Buy A Vowel & Still Couldnt Even Rap Wit Ease / E's
Little Faggot Please.. If Ya Iron Aiming? u "Knee'd N Struck Shins" Like Fighting Training!!!
(Need Instructions / Knee'd N Struck Shins)



His old name was hazard.
Bar Rock / Barrack
He often speaks bad on quix name.

[MesaR]

Mutli's - Demon
Punchlines - Both
Personals - Demon..
Enjoyment - Demon,..
Flow - Ambition..

Vote - demon just an all round better verse, thought ambition came pretty decent with it.. but the nameplay and punchlines from demon done it for me. .

[Riggz]

Ambition:
This Is a Arena You Shouldn't Tour,it'll rattle ya Puddin Core
1 Round?? You Remain Under Rugged Like Aynt Enough Material 4 Wooden Floors
3/5 Nice punch, delivery could’ve been better on the set up

Its Seeming Like This'll Be Crucial Kid
Your Pops a Molesta, Explains How Blood Shot ya Pupil Is
2.5/5 Again delivery is not there. No set up for the punch

Reroute ya Tracks Like BMX Cheaters, I Got Squeeze Ya Neck Fever
Your Already 1-1 U'll Always Need 'Sis Co' Like a DMX Feature..
2.5/5 As much as I hate foot notes, I needed one for this punch

I Slayed The Glitch Left needles of Gold Across His Stitchd Chest
Like i Deleted all contacts It Took a Big Mes' To Clean Out This Bitch Text..
2.5/5 Amb, what are you talkin’ about? Sometimes it just looks like you’re just typin’ shit without really putting any thought into what others may read.

Your Acting Selfish Cause Your Wack n Helpliss Ur Act is Velvet
Treat ya Crew Head First Never Attach To Helmets Stuck On Q Tip Like Ear Wax has Melted
2.5/5 Here again, I think you got too much chat room metaphors going on here that aren’t relevant to the battle (or any battle for that matter).

If Vocally your the Champ i'll put a Belt Ta ya Neck
Yall just Seen Demon go Down .. JESUS What The Fuck Else ya Expect??
2.5 Nice attempt at name play, but the closer wasn’t hard at all.
Most of the points I gave you Amb was for your metaphors and word play, but hardly any punchlines or personals in this battle. Like you copied have of this from some old chatbox drop and strung it together merely for the purpose of this battle.
Amb – 15.5/30 average verse

Demon:
You The Worse Veteran Bro, & With Textin u Blow, Watch My Bar Rock Ambition Like The Presidents Goals!
3/5 – Ha, nice political punch.. could’ve been delivered better, but I liked it.
Quix Was Wreckin This Hoe, u Ain Hard Or ill, Q Got This Dummy On His Nuts Like Retarded Squrriles
2.5/5 I would’ve stayed away from this personal until doing more research. And ILL/Squirrels isn’t the best rhyme format
All My Bars Is ill, Man I'm Wreck'n This Newbie, Only Time Duke a Hazard? Was In Jessicas Movie!
3/5 Punch was nice with the name play, but Amb is far from a Newbie on this site.
Learn a Lesson ya Groupie...Once The Toys Gripped? I'd Send Ya Ass Higher Then Ushers Voice Pitch!
2.5/5 Not a bad punch but set up wasn’t there.
This Lil Boy Ripped, Man im Rapin His Verse! Only Time ull Beat Demon? Is If u Prayin in Church!
3/5 Nice punch, set up could’ve been better.
Demons Rapin This Nerd! I'ma Vet So Strong, Vs Me? u "Beat Quicker" Then Some Techno Songs!
2.5/5 nah, saw where you was going with it, but even in this short bar… you had too many fillers getting to the punch.

Nothin u Rep Is Strong! & u Ass With Keys, u Could Buy A Vowel & Still Couldnt Even Rap Wit Ease / E's
Little Faggot Please.. If Ya Iron Aiming? u "Knee'd N Struck Shins" Like Fighting Training!!!
Not going to count these last two lines cause both of you went over your own limit and looks like Amb added two more to his just to match yours and he still missing 4 lines to get to you.
Demon – 16.5
Demon takes this due to more direct punches. Like I said Amb, I think you merely threw yours together for the sake of rhyming and not really battling.. because I’ve seen you aim your bars far better than this.
Vote - Demon

[LogiK]

Uppin.

-- Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:43 pm --

2-0 Uppin..

[Lucky One]

Reroute ya Tracks Like BMX Cheaters, I Got Squeeze Ya Neck Fever
Your Already 1-1 U'll Always Need 'Sis Co' Like a DMX Feature..

I Slayed The Glitch Left needles of Gold Across His Stitchd Chest
Like i Deleted all contacts It Took a Big Mes' To Clean Out This Bitch Text.

those two we're what i liked the most. The first bar was nice! Second was good to, i
caught the flow, and everything.

vs

You The Worse Veteran Bro, & With Textin u Blow, Watch My Bar Rock Ambition Like The Presidents Goals!
Quix Was Wreckin This Hoe, u Ain Hard Or ill, Q Got This Dummy On His Nuts Like Retarded Squrriles

Nothin u Rep Is Strong! & u Ass With Keys, u Could Buy A Vowel & Still Couldnt Even Rap Wit Ease / E's
Little Faggot Please.. If Ya Iron Aiming? u "Knee'd N Struck Shins" Like Fighting Training!!!

^ That ambition line was nice!! And that wordplay in ya second bar? Was creative as hell.



punches demon
nameplay demon
flow demon, his multies got this
wordplay demon
personals ambition, demons was funny but ambition was more creative.
multies demon
vote demon

now this was a good battle! The best one I seen so far. Ambition you should work on how you word some of ya lines. I get them, but then it feels like it could be more effective, if you just word it better. Demon? same for you, that techno line for example, it was good, i got it, but it could of been worded better also. Both of ya'll did good


But my vote goes to demon.

[MesaR]

3-0, someone close this.. good battle