Sequence Vs Young Dosia

[MesaR]

The rematch...

5 bars, due 24 after both check ins

Nameplay
Punchlines
Wordplay
Multi's
Flow.. that cool?

Consider this my check..

[YungDosia]

*and in the votes, they need to pick fav lines*

YESSSIR!!!

check...!

[MesaR]

Lyrically maul-this-lame, cause it's a known fact he come's small-with-game,
Point and aim, cause my " record is untouchable " like old music's hall-of-fame,

Loosing again, wonder how this thug-feels, you anit buzzing like dud-pills,
i flood-skills, and got " dosia in the palm of my hand " like drug-deals,

Yung's verse is grosser-than-his-nails, a faggot.. he bat's-over-to-males,
The truth not tales, the MC's here dont " weigh up " like dodgy dosia-on-the-scales

If you think the jokes-over-never-mind, i'll crush Yung with a wrecking rhyme,
so fuck it let him shine, this anit peer pressure but i'll "smoke-dosia-a-second-time",

You're a soft-cunt-with-diminished-shit, no one's ever bumped you Written's prick,
The fact's are nothing new, cause most dosia is known to be "chopped-up-and-finished-quick"

Were both over the deadline, so it's what ever,

[YungDosia]

...BEAST MODE ON UM...

Ya flows been deceased, dead skills something u can't send back...!
So its funny how ur into Making History...when uve already been that...!!!

Fuck the wordplay, heres a personal bout how u cant handle a chick...!
Cuz his girls got a 'stupid body'...with a 'dumbass' man on her hip...!!!

I cant stand your shit, no dj will give ya verse a spin...!
Cuz in the clutch, and when its 'CrunchTime'...you spit worse then him...!!!

Hows dosia dursting him? its easy, to simple someone gimmi my next win...!
Before 'Se' gets used more times, then greeting a mexican...!!!

Kids got no family, no life, all hes holding onto is a nice dream...!
Cuz his pops and moms desserted him...without a scoop of ice cream...!!!

quick 10, lets get some votes!

*Dursting...IN cali means finishing a bowl*

[- Mutual -]

Lyrically maul-this-lame, cause it's a known fact he come's small-with-game,
Point and aim, cause my " record is untouchable " like old music's hall-of-fame,

Mayne Not Bad Coulda Been Worded Better Nice Multies So 8/10

Loosing again, wonder how this thug-feels, you anit buzzing like dud-pills,
i flood-skills, and got " dosia in the palm of my hand " like drug-deals,

kinda overused and dud pills? really? lol nevermind 6/10

Yung's verse is grosser-than-his-nails, a faggot.. he bat's-over-to-males,
The truth not tales, the MC's here dont " weigh up " like dodgy dosia-on-the-scales

wasnt bad but the wording wasnt great 7/10

If you think the jokes-over-never-mind, i'll crush Yung with a wrecking rhyme,
so fuck it let him shine, this anit peer pressure but i'll "smoke-dosia-a-second-time",

aye this was a bit nicer nice multies flow was good 9/10

You're a soft-cunt-with-diminished-shit, no one's ever bumped you Written's prick,
The fact's are nothing new, cause most dosia is known to be "chopped-up-and-finished-quick"

mayne i likes it no real sting but i like 8/10

Total = 38/50

Ya flows been deceased, dead skills something u can't send back...!
So its funny how ur into Making History...when uve already been that...!!!

aye nice bar right here shoulda incorporated multies 9/10

Fuck the wordplay, heres a personal bout how u cant handle a chick...!
Cuz his girls got a 'stupid body'...with a 'dumbass' man on her hip...!!!

ahh ripped him up this was hella nice multies flow was good 9.5(nothings perfect)

I cant stand your shit, no dj will give ya verse a spin...!
Cuz in the clutch, and when its 'CrunchTime'...you spit worse then him...!!!

ahh not bad nice flow and not a bad bar 7/10

Hows dosia dursting him? its easy, to simple someone gimmi my next win...!
Before 'Se' gets used more times, then greeting a mexican...!!!

not great horrible rhymes lol 4/10 dursting him lol not good

Kids got no family, no life, all hes holding onto is a nice dream...!
Cuz his pops and moms desserted him...without a scoop of ice cream...!!!

not bad wordplay alot better than the last bar 8/10

Total = 37.5/50

Seq Gets My Vote JUST!!!

Vote: Sequence

[Lawgix]

1-0 Sequence lets keep this battle goin!!!

uppin more votes!!!!

[Deciple]

Man like for real i dont feel like writing down and breaking down each bar and all like Mutual but the way i read it Sequence had some nice bars and i liked the flow that he write it to, Yung Dosia had more personals but a couple bars i didnt care to much for, Sequence i liked the whole thing so imma vote Sequence

[Lawgix]

Man like for real i dont feel like writing down and breaking down each bar and all like Mutual but the way i read it Sequence had some nice bars and i liked the flow that he write it to, Yung Dosia had more personals but a couple bars i didnt care to much for, Sequence i liked the whole thing so imma vote Sequence

bro u gotta start breakin down ur vote or their gonna toss ur votes out... explain them like Mutual did man... or else don't vote at all... just being fair...

[Deciple]

Dude, No disrespect all he did was take each bar and then say if it was good or bad, i do the same thing but with the whole thing... but You want me to break it down, Im Game....

Sequence

Lyrically maul-this-lame, cause it's a known fact he come's small-with-game,
Point and aim, cause my " record is untouchable " like old music's hall-of-fame,

Came Strong, Good lyrics, really stands out with the Word-Word-Word rhyme 9/10

Loosing again, wonder how this thug-feels, you anit buzzing like dud-pills,
i flood-skills, and got " dosia in the palm of my hand " like drug-deals,

I Like this mulit, this bar concept was tight. 8/10

Yung's verse is grosser-than-his-nails, a faggot.. he bat's-over-to-males,
The truth not tales, the MC's here dont " weigh up " like dodgy dosia-on-the-scales

Came alittle late with the personal, outta all the bars this the weakest but still good 5/10

If you think the jokes-over-never-mind, i'll crush Yung with a wrecking rhyme,
so fuck it let him shine, this anit peer pressure but i'll "smoke-dosia-a-second-time",

Enough said here this is a really good bar for a battle, good lyrics, personal, flow all good on this one 9/10

You're a soft-cunt-with-diminished-shit, no one's ever bumped you Written's prick,
The fact's are nothing new, cause most dosia is known to be "chopped-up-and-finished-quick"

This is a good verse, i woulda switched the 4th and 5th bars tho, went out strong but over all good 7/10

Total = 38/50

Yung Dosia

Ya flows been deceased, dead skills something u can't send back...!
So its funny how ur into Making History...when uve already been that...!!!

Good start 9/10

Fuck the wordplay, heres a personal bout how u cant handle a chick...!
Cuz his girls got a 'stupid body'...with a 'dumbass' man on her hip...!!!

This is good, came fast with the personal and wrote it well 9/10

I cant stand your shit, no dj will give ya verse a spin...!
Cuz in the clutch, and when its 'CrunchTime'...you spit worse then him...!!!

Good diss, good word use 7/10

Hows dosia dursting him? its easy, to simple someone gimmi my next win...!
Before 'Se' gets used more times, then greeting a mexican...!!!

This could have been thought out more, im not feelin this bar at all 3/10

Kids got no family, no life, all hes holding onto is a nice dream...!
Cuz his pops and moms desserted him...without a scoop of ice cream...!!!

like mutual said good wordplay alot better than the last bar 7/10


35/50

Vote is in...

[MesaR]

Thanks for the votes, they seem legit.
you all good with that so far dosia ?

[Riggz]

I liked this battle, I'll be back to edit my vote in an hour or II. Was up all night working so I gotta catch some zzz's.

-- Thu Feb 18, 2010 11:03 pm --

Lyrically maul-this-lame, cause it's a known fact he come's small-with-game,
Point and aim, cause my " record is untouchable " like old music's hall-of-fame,
3/5 nice multi, punch wasn’t aimed at Dosia tho

Loosing again, wonder how this thug-feels, you anit buzzing like dud-pills,
i flood-skills, and got " dosia in the palm of my hand " like drug-deals,
3.5/5 beginning of the set up could’ve been better, but punch was nice

Yung's verse is grosser-than-his-nails, a faggot.. he bat's-over-to-males,
The truth not tales, the MC's here dont " weigh up " like dodgy dosia-on-the-scales
2.5/5 That must be some Australian thing.. I didn’t get it.

If you think the jokes-over-never-mind, i'll crush Yung with a wrecking rhyme,
so fuck it let him shine, this anit peer pressure but i'll "smoke-dosia-a-second-time",
3/5 as played as “smokin’ dosia” is, Seq, you put it together differently. Not sure why I liked it/ and didn’t like this bar at the same time.

You're a soft-cunt-with-diminished-shit, no one's ever bumped you Written's prick,
The fact's are nothing new, cause most dosia is known to be "chopped-up-and-finished-quick"
3/5 the multis are there, but when you read what you’re actually saying it’s just setups created for the primary purpose of the punchline. Nothing really hard hitting. But I gotta give you effort for word play.
15/25
Ya flows been deceased, dead skills something u can't send back...!
So its funny how ur into Making History...when uve already been that...!!!
4/5 loved the opener from start to finish

Fuck the wordplay, heres a personal bout how u cant handle a chick...!
Cuz his girls got a 'stupid body'...with a 'dumbass' man on her hip...!!!
3.5/5 nice set up and personal punch

I cant stand your shit, no dj will give ya verse a spin...!
Cuz in the clutch, and when its 'CrunchTime'...you spit worse then him...!!!
2.5/5 Not sure of the relevance between Crunch and Sequence, but the personal didn’t hit the mark very well

Hows dosia dursting him? its easy, to simple someone gimmi my next win...!
Before 'Se' gets used more times, then greeting a mexican...!!!
3/5 I laughed my ass off at the punch

Kids got no family, no life, all hes holding onto is a nice dream...!
Cuz his pops and moms desserted him...without a scoop of ice cream...!!!
2.5/5 I just didn’t quite know how to feel about this bar.
15.5/25
I will say this, Seq had a few punches that were dead on, but the set ups just weren’t there with it. If he could’ve found a way to make both his set up and his punch fluid, he would’ve totally took my vote as Dosia had about 2 or 3 bars that were consistent enough to squeak by IMO.

Nice battle guys
Vote=Dosia

[MesaR]

woah .5 to get a vote.. that was close.. thanks for the detailed vote riggs, upping this shit..

[Lawgix]

2-1 sequence in the lead uppin!!!

[Lucky One]

Hows dosia dursting him? its easy, to simple someone gimmi my next win...!
Before 'Se' gets used more times, then greeting a mexican...!!!

Kids got no family, no life, all hes holding onto is a nice dream...!
Cuz his pops and moms desserted him...without a scoop of ice cream...!!!

those were my favorite, that ice cream bar was nice.

vs

If you think the jokes-over-never-mind, i'll crush Yung with a wrecking rhyme,
so fuck it let him shine, this anit peer pressure but i'll "smoke-dosia-a-second-time

^ Im liking this



Nameplay sequence
Punchlines sequence
Wordplay yung dosia
Multi's sequence
Flow tie, both needs to be fixed.v
vote sequence

Sequence gets my vote, but you really shouldn't of used that many drug nameplays through out ya verse. It shows you can't think of any other nameplays, and if he we're to type a few nameplays that weren't the same dissing you, he would of probably won that category. Ya last bar wasn't that good or effective. Yung dosia you came good, just didn't bring enough to win this. That history line was pretty funny, but when it comes to creativity, sequence got you.



my vote is for sequence.