Psalms 21:10

[Riggz]

I appease agendas with a frieze of splinters that rime skittish
Sendin’ rhymes in binary with encryptions and fine snippets
Just to align critics who scratch the surface of mainstreams
Wash the girth of the plains clean with verses that maim teams
No worth in your lame themes follow me in a game of chicken
Kirk Cameron got “left behind” but you still in the same position
One thing that I ain't mentioned, I got the spit of a titan type
It ain’t cocky when you speak softly and carry a stick of dynamite
You feelin’ enlightened right? But get back in the finals stupid
Take a whiff of the cyanide I tapped out of your spinal fluid
I vision with eyes pellucid, “see” I blew it for new believers
I’ll never get air play… throwin bombs that nuke receivers
My words induce a seizure, records go deeper than wax
Strong armin the guard dogs while groomin’ the weaker cats
Dudes is eager for facts so I might lessen the grammar
These raps will carve a map to leave your legends enamored
Each epics a hammer, cock it, don’t even look at me wrong
Cause I can dissect the life of wannabe crook in three psalms

[QwarterZ]

I appease agendas with a frieze of splinters that rime skittish
Sendin’ rhymes in binary with encryptions and fine snippets

^^^^^^^^ I like that opener

this was purdy dope I see your coming along purdy good Riggz
funny how much improvement we all gaining
keep writing my dude!

a very underrated write in my eyes

[Riggz]

I agree QZ, i'm one of the most underrated textcees on this site...but it's all good.. that's why I catch'em by surprise in battles.

maybe people just don't understand me

[NoVeL]

Damn you on a level I am tryna achieve.. Very Skillful n Scripted

Riggz whats up?

[Quix]

YUP...OPENER WAS ILLL HOMMIE!

shit came across real nice intelectually, and flow was dope as well!


No worth in your lame themes follow me in a game of chicken
Kirk Cameron got “left behind” but you still in the same position

felt that tooo ^

[Riggz]

ThoUghT --- some things just come with time and practice man. I receive word of the day quotes in my inbox.. I just inject them in my flow.

Quix, that's an honor coming from a fellow text artist as yourself, i appreciate it.

[DaPrince]

I agree with Q that opener was a killer and the whole thing flowed well and your vocab was off the hook.

"...I got the spit of a titan type
It ain’t cocky when you speak softly and carry a stick of dynamite
You feelin’ enlightened right? ..."

^^ Yes sir I was definitely enlightened by this whole piece. It makes me want to step my game up a lot more, keep droppin' and I'll keep reading

[S.O.S]

its shit like that that make a nigga wanna keep practicin, lol. good shit. big ups big homie

[Young K]

I vision with eyes pellucid, “see” I blew it for new believers
I’ll never get air play… throwin bombs that nuke receivers

^^^^
Awesome

This shit was fire man, the flow was on point and the lyrics were very well written. The opening was crazy but it completely outdid the ending you know what I mean? It wasn't bad at all though good drop.

[complexity]

One thing that I ain't mentioned, I got the spit of a titan type
It ain’t cocky when you speak softly and carry a stick of dynamite
You feelin’ enlightened right? But get back in the finals stupid
Take a whiff of the cyanide I tapped out of your spinal fluid
I vision with eyes pellucid, “see” I blew it for new believers
I’ll never get air play… throwin bombs that nuke receivers

My favorite part.

I thought this was a strong piece and entertained me. But nothing in the piece came close to the lines I quoted.

[ReFleXiOn]

you came correct for the most part, some of your metaphors are a tad, subtle, could be more effective, like the overall drop though, fav. part...

"One thing that I ain't mentioned, I got the spit of a titan type
It ain’t cocky when you speak softly and carry a stick of dynamite"

[Riggz]

Preciate it. Glad you feelin it (even parts of it).

[Ke!!ee Ripa!]

nice..the delivery was really good...flowed well it was cool

[eMCee Havic]

i gotta say man this shit was lyrically insane.. great vocab awesome imagery. lines were dope as fuck a great write.. shit was definatly worth the read. keep um coming

[Riggz]

Thanks for the love. ^^^^^^