The Story Of A Tale.(5th Mixtape Track)Micz As Brian,Ashley,

[16 Micz]

The Story Of A Tale

[Brian]
My names Brian, feeling suspicious from the drugs that im buying
mom always crying, dad acts like a lion
feelin like the man of the house the whole families relying
big brother in jail day by day, dying
i have an addiction, something i must mention
took a prediction that im near the end of this life that im living
just got outta jail for robbery, and cocaine possession
never made a confession, snitching is not a weapon
my dad beats my mom everyday infront of my little sister
she doesnt even call him dad, hes justa mister
everytime i come home shes either crying or sleeping
my moms sad, cause dads always lying and cheating
one night i come home early and what a surprise
my dads on my sister with tears in her eyes..

[Ashley]
my names ashley, all my life ive been unhappy
living in a house thats crappy, with a dad that slaps me
have a boyfriend, i only get away in his jeep
look at mom i can tell she wants dad slayed in his sleep
when she comes home from work the bills always bothers her
me and my brother wish for a new father
but i got personal things that i never share
like when mom and brians asleep, dad takes off my underwear
he threatened to kill me if i ever told
not only does he take em off, he puts something in the hole
but now i think im pregnant my boyfriend Robert is confused
cause since dad has started my private area has been bruised
dont know what to do so i write to relieve pain and anger
and if my mom finds out he'll grab a chain and hang her
i try to go to church and live life in the right path
feeling awkward and self conscience when a guy looks at my ass
had a dream last night, dad was at the end of his life pleeding
next night i walk in the house and moms neck was bleeding..

[Terrance]
My names terrance, im from cali, mother was a single parent
poor, and all the kids use to crack on what im wearin
couldnt bare it, lived life with unfair shit
war?i declared it, since i came out moms wombs
gang bangin my body was wanted in a tomb
when it came to chicks everybody called me a rookie
i only knew about sex cause every night my mom shared her pussy
quit the violence, moved on to the chicks
learned new tricks, til a chick told me shes caring a new kid
i was only 18 but this situation im in is ruthless
mom kicked me out, chick left the house
she got shot one in the chest another in her mouth
i still feel the pain in my heart when i think about it
mom cried too i can still hear her scream about it
met a new girl then we later married
just the thought of losing someone else made it scary
i have 3 kids secrets with each one
and i think i might have a step son
see i fuck my daughter, rape and maul'er
i hate my son, each days hes making me feel smaller
i cant live like this i beat on my wife
when im not with my daughter i go to the streets in the night
one night i got drunk and my wife was aggitating
grab a knife slit her throat my heart was rapidly pacing
my daughter walked in she has an ass like her mom
she starts crying while i have the knife in my palm
i sit her on the couch and i take off her clothes
the noise screeching from the house air breathing out her nose
i began the intercourse as she tries to fight it
my son brian walks in and the house is silent
he pulls out a gun i quickly jump and hesitate
feel the blood racing and my body elevates
my daughter grabs my arms put them behind my back and says shes got me
then my son aims the gun at my brain and he...(i quickly remember from childhood to the marriage
living life without, now being a bad parent) then he shot me.

[16 Micz]

going on the mixtape the 5th track we have so far although i have some other was just didnt add them but this is the 5th official track.

[craven]

yo dude that shit wuz tight..of course i admire ur work....and ive been keeping an eye out for ya lyrics im a fan already...well peace (i need help wid my shit)....lol.

[16 Micz]

aim me if u got aim ill try to see if i can help you. n thx for the post.

[complexity]

This was creative, the story was pretty tight. My only reservations is the simplicity of the rhymes. But I liked it.

[16 Micz]

yea i purposely made it simple..just to tell the story with more detail and such.

[drunken jesus]

cool storys

the flow/wording in alot of parts was mad awkward though, it has potential i'd rewrite it if i was you though, some parts look like your just trying to find some random word to rhyme to continue with the story

[16 Micz]

lol which i was...