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Picture the blood bath from gun claps it's Sickening Dawg/
It's so sad u hold back cuz what you Witness Is Wrong/
These symptoms and sickness ain't the Vision From God/
Nor is it losing your friends, when the Victims Are Gone/
Depressions like the feeling of being Rejected and Hopeless/
It's every single thing that you Neglected to Notice/
So you take it an stride, even if you're Breaking Inside/
Facing the lies, basically anxiously Awaiting To Die/
Feels like it's taking ur pride, feel the pain from Different Angles/
Start tripping then you start slitting ur veins til they're Ripped and Mangled/
I'm not fit for halos, but now back to the Topic at Hand/
My balance slipping but talent isn't, Jesus Christ, God's Gift To Man/
Got sicker plans, but feel like I should give it up cuz I ain't Finding Help/
Might as well, write my suicide note in blood from the wrist I Sliced Myself/
Lighting black candles with a quija board to summon Lifeless Spirits/
No reason for, bringing these demons forth, I just wanna Cypher With It/
I like their visit, speaking Latin backwards as Im Drawing their Pentagram/
Eat rappers as a snack first, leave their beating Heart on the Center Stand/
It's seldom known, I didn't call the devil just to Sell My Soul/
For a "talent I possess" but I digress, I need no one to Help Me Grow/
From this, hell I know, photographic how I Develop Thru The Negative/
Hella graphic, almost telepathic how I'm Enveloped In My Edifice/
These sentences for my nemesis is excellent from my Demons Penmanship/
Rhymes turn to ash, blood urn is smashed, and the Reasons Evident/
If you learned all the secrets I'm speaking would u Even Believe It?/
I mean you can't spell "beaLIEve," without the Lie, so Who's Really Deceiving?/
We can't choose between who's the demon, cause we're Stupid People/
So if you do Believe, then you Will See, what they Do Is Evil/
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Post by complexity »

man. i fucking hate depression, but it surely does bring out the creativity and anger. all kinds of nice bars.
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Thanks Plex. Wasn't really expecting any replies but thought I'd post something just to see. I'll be bouncing back and forth here to check in
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