Freestyle

[drunken jesus]

time-is-money ya'll-gotta-price-to-pay rhyming-funny
cause none of ya'll-droppin-nice-as-jay grinding-lovely
bomb-hotter-mics-decay grimy,-bust-beats ain't lying-trust-me
fakes-buying-huffys i'm rich-bitch, play-mine-and-bust-seeds,
all-over-ya-speakers my hits-twich ya'll-go-in-a-seizure,
fall-flowing-on-beats, word, all-throwing-ya-weak-verse
but i-ain't-mad-at-that i'm laughing back with a stash of hash
mashing that half in half dabbed in an acid batch smash and
blasting tracks in a mask and half my asscrack'll flash
as i'm after half the passing class after naps at their habitat
of a preschool, imagine that? be cool weak fools get a smile
i ain't a pedophile, so don't be doubting me shining
i do this shit without even trying, you? you're shit, lousy-with-rhyming
busting-a-wack-sort of nothing-that'll-pass-for decent-shit
you need-to-quit fronting-you-ass-whore, fiending-dicks,
dropping meaningless schemes-of-shit up-on-a-wack-board
saying nothing-new stuff-thats-true, what the fuck-do-you-rap-for?
you got-no-structure, drop-flows-observed with no hint-of-rhythm
simple-bitchs just glimpse-the-viscious mental-pictures i bend-in-scriptures
and-quit with your-wack-shit damn-kids verse-lacking wake-up gay-punk
just fake-fuck-multis ya make-up-faulty jerking-to-eminem-posters
bursting-ya-feminen vocals, not making sense-with-them-posing
like braking ten pull gin saking mental men playing dental den
making temples mix baking lenitls quick for sake of pen poll pits
and still the retards probably'll need to read-the-shit-again
to even see that the last bar of weak-stuff-mimmiced-them

[16 Micz]

rhyme scheme was pretty dope i liked the vocab n i saw some multis good freestyle 8/10

[complexity]

some multi's? this thing was fucking jam packed with em. Overall this was a really tight freestyle. With a dope concept, some good dissing. I really liked this one. 9/10. And there was some subliminals i'm pretty sure, dont know if anyone else caught em.

[Ambiguous Realm]

9/10 liked the topic and multis ..couple times i got confused but overall it was nice

[leeroi green]

uppin

[Def-init]

multis, substance, flow. all on point. even more so considering its a free style!!
Nice work budz!

[ippiki_17]

Your a BEAST! Enough said. I enjoyed it, the dashes in between the words were fucking me up while I read it though. Nonetheless you killed it.