Collectively Skilled ... Alvin & Loon E Lou

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Collectively Skilled ... Alvin & Loon E Lou

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yo i liked this had a real smooth feel.. though i thought it could been harder of a song.. you know just grimy and ill like the title states.



But........

none the less it was sick good mixing and quality from the both of you


Liked both delivery styles, and lyrics a smooth combination with big als vocals deeper and loons higher pitched vocals mixed good together. solid track man and thanks for the feed
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fucking DOPE! nothing else to say.... just fucking DOPE!!!!!
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Can't believe I haven't listen to this until now. Both deliveries we're on point. Al, I think your flow was just a tad off in about two or three parts, but only minor quibbles, there. Nice shit, overall. Collectively Ill, holding it down.
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This is a cool track, I like the dark feel to the beat and I think you guys did it justice. Solid flows and good delivery!

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such an eerily dark vibe comin off this track.
u guys' deliveries dynamically match really well.
pretty tite. lyrics are cool. not outstanding. some dope lines tho. but u guys both rode the beat real nicely with a certain attitude to ur delivery that kept it entertaining for sure. and u both seemed to use decent multis and maintain a nice flow. nice shit
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this shit went sickly...both yalls flows was great and the ambiance and vibe yall really jived it. def diggin this track, good shit fellas keep em comin
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well i wont lie it has a quality to it however it is forgettable i listened closely and when it was over i didnt remember a single point that stood out loons verse was better al could step it up but you got a smooth style but you gotta really be on some high power shit calling this song collectively skilled or maybe even fed off of each others bars y'kknow display some skill collectively but any ways its good to hear yall working just keep in mind that a strong catchy hook could make this a lot more memorable

be easy and step it up both of you are much more capable
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hooks aren't everything... i see where they were goin with this... just wanted a collab to show off the lyrics n what not... hooks don't mean shit to be honest with you... i'd rather hear a str8 up cypher with NO hook than hear the same fuckin hook 4 times in a row... so consider this a cypher... now feeding off each other... that would have been dope... but not easily done... since their in different states n shit... that would have taken forever and it probably would have sounded whack as fuck... i think it sounded fine the way it is...
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thank you leeroi. i think

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yeah it sounds fine if thats what youre going for but you are correct about not needing a hook really the point i'd like to make is that when you make a song you want people to get some part of that song stuck in their head and for me nothing stuck
see for me i'm like yo this is al and loon lemme check it out ok now what part of this song do i like that i will play it again idk i dont even recall a single point where i was like damn and i'm being real and not blowing smoke up the homies ass i think it sounds good but what is the point if not to elevate and i believe these boys can do waaaaaaaaay better and thats my opinion i am absolutely not hating loon snapped inn a few spots and i was like ok but nothing tremendous or mind blowing at no point was i dazzled by these guys skills or quotables it was cool though it sounded good its just well not good enough i guess but if these guys continue to evolve they may soon be a force to be reckoned with
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its cool man. i said thanks. one person out of a couple hundred is never bad.

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Lol I know I'm late but fuck it

This song is still hard as hell, alvin killed this shit.
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hooks actually mean alot now adays @law cuz ppl want sumthin 2 remember but yea this is raw u guys is nice keep it up

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cyanidesyn wrote:hooks actually mean alot now adays @law cuz ppl want sumthin 2 remember but yea this is raw u guys is nice keep it up
not all the time... sometimes a song doesn't need a hook.... they get too cliched... and sound stupid... plus if u have only a two or three minute song where its just rapping... no need for a hook... its just overkill...
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