HIP HOP BABY!!

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HIP HOP BABY!!

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[soundclick]10941283[/soundclick]

Here's a sneak peak off my next album...holla

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First thing i notice is your swag and flo man... its legit on this type of beat.. the beat itself is so sick, its one of those beats where you can change your flow and style up multiple times and still make it sound tight. You got real lyrics man, i can feel the words as you spit them man.. this is a raw heart felt track man, its what i dig.. Def a solid track. Keep it up man
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loved it, the beat, your voice and ur flow all awesome, i would have wanted to have had written lyrics to sing along 2....great job, ur good!

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duuuuuudeee!!!!! this shit was fucking ill man...

presence was awesome.. great lyrics and content.. loved the beat great track

don't have anything bad to say about it... can't wait for the album man..

keep it up homie
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Mixing is good. Your voice records well. Your doing a good job riding the bass drum. The lyrics pick up as the song progresses and moves into the shot-out parts. The doubles on your voice are done tastefully.

All in all this is a solid track and would sound good on an album ... Sounds like you're off to a good start.

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I Like what you did with this, Good Flow, Presence
good topic.. Keep it up
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thanx for all the feed guys..keep it coming..you i return it...1

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imm feel'in it lookin for collab... stay hungry
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aight feed is much appreciated..keep them comin..at least I Return The Feed...holla

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YOU SOUND DIIIIIIRTY BRO!!!!!!! Hot though, spittin some history lessons homie. Sensei swag!!!
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I liked it man your flow and the beat blended perfectly in this one

Keep up the good work

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yo thats hard mate, kind of shit i would bang out in my whip

flow perfectly fits the beat and your multis and in-rhymes are nice as well

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Good looks on the feed guys.. and droppin traxx..ill be peeping em out
time to time..

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Everything is on point here. Delivery, vocals, presence, energy, mixing, writing. I'm digging it. The only negative thing I could say, and this is personal preference, is that there is really no "difference" signifying what is the chorus and what is the verse. By that, I mean your vocals sound the same. I'm used to hearing a difference in vocals with choruses, because they just seem more lively, or slightly different in tone than the verse does. Your voice just sounded, well, the same, between verse and chorus. Like I said, this was personal preference, so don't look at it as a bad thing. Good track bro.
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ayo thanx for the feed on that..i hear what you sayin..i normally have the hook and verses different..but after doing so many songs that way , i felt like breaking that mold and trying something a lil different for creativity's sake...

keep the feed coming guys i always RTF!!

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