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Trinity (collab)

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haven't been on here in a while.. anyway here's a track of mine i did with crew, over a jmt instru

be back to drop feed on others later

i'm on the 1st verse, steel on 3rd
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nice jedi mind tricks.
-liked the latino vibe, on this track.
Prince ripped it the best in my opinion like the presence you held.
Jsteel sounded a lil stumbly on the words almost mumbled but still held it down. good shit man.
last guy was all right too much spanish shit for my taste.


Good track man i dug it..
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this be much better if you put some more enunciation in the lyrics. this would sound pretty good with a decent mic i think. Lyrics was aite some parts harder to hear than others. im not sure if you guys even did dubs or not lol. but just stay grinding.
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Really appreciate the feed guys, @anti yup enunciation is something we gotta work on, we just did this out the blue in feb so i found it n mixed it up, to be honest i'm not really that deep on mixing n stuff i just learnt a bit by keeping at it, i use a rode podcaster mic, it that ain't sufficient or if it's just my mixing then i'd like to know, and we didn't do dubs i heard it after the 1st takes n thought it's just fine for this type of beat, imo
thanks for the feed again, appreciated

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Well you got ya multi game goin. And ya Flo's pretty much on.

Second guy has better presence and delivery but cant really understand him as much.

3rd guys Flo triply..its aight tho..was mostly on.deliver was coo ..


The beat was pretty grimy that classic shit....



All in all this was a pretty good effort ..

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I agree, watch how your words slur together. Make the separations between them more pronounced. The quality is a bit rough at times, but that's completely understandable with using a podcast mic. Those are more meant for talking and not rapping/supporting those louder tones. Overall, I think all three emcees hit the nail on the head with their vocal presence, as I felt like I was listening to something JMT or Immortal Technique would say. It just had that, underground grimy feeling. If this was done back in February, I'm curious as to some of the new works you have made more recently. Anyways, decent track. Keep at it.
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@2xS really appreciate that feedback man thanks. Will keep in mind all that's said.

will be uploading some new shit soon too, peace

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