now your bodies segmented, and inner organs extended/
these angels try to surround me but i hold em demented/
featured are dented, see your corpse is cemented/
i walk away with the prize and my force is contented/
elevated thunder sound, hold artillary when you come around/
resting with the burrows of coffins im bound underground/
eyes are open when im catchin some z's, equipped with sick strategies/
because i expect no less then perfect like japanese families/
run through your faculties, become a victim to casualties/
i could change the orbit of planets on distant wisdom galaxies/
being diiferent is my preference, and you can check the reference/
because your breath would stop with the end of the sentence/
it's over with my presence, as soon as i make my entrance/
like ancient vandetta's these rappers beg for there veangence/
my lyrics are rhythmic, im a physical mystic/
your about as sick as 9th graders in there high school clinic/
it's these lines they mimick, i drop a punchline they get with it/
the fact remains there basic styles a gimmick/
drop a line through a prism, so i dont shine i glisten/
these jaw breaker type of rhymes are not designed to be bitten/
The Scriptures
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Re: The Scriptures
Nice, very nice I don't mean to compare to anyone, but dam that was on some Big Pun shit! I enjoyed it lol!
Re: The Scriptures
haha hey its an honor to be even slightly compared to pun man. Much appreciate it
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Re: The Scriptures
nice drop homie
you got a horrorcore kinda vibe to a lot of your drops.. good vocab and great contingence keep it up man
you got a horrorcore kinda vibe to a lot of your drops.. good vocab and great contingence keep it up man
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Re: The Scriptures
its crazy, hardcore like pun, but with a lot of advanced metaphors like old school positive rap at the same time, dope balance.
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Word up! Haha yeah I guess do have abut of that horrorcore type of style to my pieces. Ad again it's an honor to be compared to pun at all I appreciate it to the max
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