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The alliteration in this is nice I agree, I love the structure, the content is beautifully written, what can I say... It's short but that in no way takes away from it, another epic poem Rell, I can say I always look forward to your drops man. Please keep em coming!
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POET OF THE YEAR 2011
I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
- MonuMental
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This was quite provocative... It stirred strange thoughts in my head... Sort of skewered my perspective and had me looking at the words sideways... I won't attempt to mark some distinctive theme, this piece doesn't call for that, in my opinion. Rather, the way you said these things has me drawing my own conclusions, as I'm sure they did for you when you wrote them. It is sick and withering but stronger than words allow. Darkly beautiful, and strange. Excellent work. I give this a 10/10.
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
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[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]
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With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
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[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]
[center]a-series-of-unfortunate-events-vt23866.html[/center]
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