(Paraphrased from Micah 7: 8-10)
Never again will you gloat over me
Like some worthless trophy
I've fallen to your fists and sneering jabs for shallow glory
Watch out, for i will rise and change the story
The darkness may rule about me
The darkness will be no more with the Lord as my light
I have sinned against you, Lord
I bear your wrath until the final court
Where His glory will be shone
And i'll see His righteousness homeward
I see the fists and sneering jabs fall back
My darknesss covers you with shame
Leaving you trampled like street filth
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- Alvin
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Re: Darkness
Not bad at all man, for paraphrasing that is. Not sure why decided to drop this paraphrase, the whole god subject tems to be a dry read and a slow one to get feed from. I guess i cant really say much cuz its a praphrase, plus, never was too good at reviewing poetry. Any how, not incredibly bad, just dry in my opinion.
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Re: Darkness
panda thinks anything biblic is dry ...
Good sht homie, i'm realy feeling this
and your wording is really good
I can see you read the bible
and phrased a few key things
that's really good, but hard to do cause not ev1 will think the same
specialy if they never picked up a bible
keep up the good work
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Good sht homie, i'm realy feeling this
and your wording is really good
I can see you read the bible
and phrased a few key things
that's really good, but hard to do cause not ev1 will think the same
specialy if they never picked up a bible
keep up the good work
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