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Poe-It
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The life i lived before you sparked a fuse inside of me was nothing short of pathetic
Heart was grinch size before his transfusion of hope and love
I had friends and i pretended to be in relatonships.
I played a role got mad when i felt i needed it.
Smiled when it suited me,complimented when i had to.
But when i got bored it ended and a new play was enacted.
Trust? Plenty of people trusted me
The same i couldnt say of them.
My problems were my own. Insecurities no one knew about
The past was a mystery.
The emotions that i possessed seemed limited to the masses.
To them i was all about rage and kicking asses.
Hell i was sposed to go. Prepurchased passes.
Hearts i used and tossed aside
The facade i had is one i hide behind.
The soulless shell walking because the man inside
Has already died.
So the role i play ive perfected.
Every mannerism is falsified, background is classified
My rage is really me it fits the role so perfectly
So this character i've molded, the real me is hard to see
Damn near impossible but you seem to be a part of me
Couldn't not speak the soul. The truth of me is shockingly
.....Not important yet you seem to think i deserve your faith.
Your support you give without a question my dreams are just a stepping stone
I can be what I want to be. In your eyes its just a matter of time.
I've told things to you about me that i never even imagined true
The emotions that i feel for you are ones that i've never knew
Unconditional. Is the trust that i have in you.

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/right ... 21647.html

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/untitled-vt21787.html

-- Mon May 09, 2011 9:47 am --

anyone? some criticism?

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EcKsTaSy
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good stuff..keep on writin

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