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Heads roll and on a platter they're served
Cold air whistles, guilotine shots to the dome
Tech, nine and a sawed of double barrel aimed at ya brim
I want platinum in my fault, crhome is to outdated
Blaze you Jimmy Hendrix like addicts, on a putrid high
Acid to ya brain, I portray morbid pictures doll face
Breaks off, kill a rapper 'n wrap him up in the crypt
I read a lot of wisdom scrolls and I got enlightened
Whistle a old song, to a new instrumental
I'm never offbeat, I'm on point like a hot topic
Get a message from your maker, and answer me please
Hope you'll be in my dimension, at the right space in time
Blind guides search for a guiding light, on the horizon
I take away a dream and kill your seeds
Breath deep, you're a dieng breed of beheaded fowl
I describe the end to be near, so you won't fret
Danger surrounds any human being, if brainwashed properly
I'm a rebel without a cause, I kill anyone outside the flock
Burn in hell is all I will say, till you wither and die
Old 'n gray is for black and white seeing bullshitters
don't give a crap about a loss, in a world full of it's own garbage
Heads roll
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I don't know how I feel about this. Were you supposed to be the devil? I feel like you could have brought a lot more to this, I think you should work on putting imagination into your drops, they are a bit basic BUT I can see where you are trying to go and I hope you keep at it cause your poetry could be epic like 2 years from now.
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I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
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Re: Heads roll
i was also feeling that because it was dark. anything like that is interesting when you write it
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Re: Heads roll
Yes I'm a devil in disguiseIllaborate wrote:I don't know how I feel about this. Were you supposed to be the devil? I feel like you could have brought a lot more to this, I think you should work on putting imagination into your drops, they are a bit basic BUT I can see where you are trying to go and I hope you keep at it cause your poetry could be epic like 2 years from now.
but no I'm not representing anything or anybody but my self
this is actualy how i feel and think about things
you can call this Ghetto poetry..
cause everything i wrote down is included in my vision
of dealing with the establishment
if you read this line you knowI'm a rebel without a cause, I kill anyone outside the flock
what i was trying to tell through the whole piece
but because I almost only used 1 liners
things might not seam to fit together that well
in other peoples perspectives
but I can see why you were thinking this was about the devil
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