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just typing
hopefully it goes somewhere and i can use it for a new track

yo yo

A Mad titan thats past fighting,stick to using my mind
elusive design made Lucifer die left a skewer inside
Moving in strides while gaining feats in amazing speeds
I break my feet!!Now take a seat before i slay ya team
Awake or asleep,play with dreams,i'm the monster in the closet
obnoxious and i'm awesome capture your subconscious and toss it
@ a concert with mosh pit, 2 many goth kids,screaming growls
then they bleed you out and feed on bowels" were gonna need a towel''!
u believe me now?just wait till its dark and yer all alone
i crawl thru phones and gnaw on bones,Insanity,is what i call my home
saw yer toes just 2 get your nerves working i got these nerds nervous.


i'll be back 2 add more
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cool drop brah
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thnx brah
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yea bro....nasty flow good multies in there tho it was a fast read the enjoyment level was def there...good description with the crawl thru phones line...semmed out a horror movie
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Pretty good multies. Flowed well too.,
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Nice quick drop with a good flow and multies. Stayed on the scheme, too.
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thnx for the feed, i think i'm keep it and add on for a new track.
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AbZ The Beast wrote:just typing
hopefully it goes somewhere and i can use it for a new track

yo yo

A Mad titan thats past fighting,stick to using my mind
elusive design made Lucifer die left a skewer inside
Moving in strides while gaining feats in amazing speeds
I break my feet!!Now take a seat before i slay ya team
Awake or asleep,play with dreams,i'm the monster in the closet
obnoxious and i'm awesome capture your subconscious and toss it
@ a concert with mosh pit, 2 many goth kids,screaming growls
then they bleed you out and feed on bowels" were gonna need a towel''!
u believe me now?just wait till its dark and yer all alone
i crawl thru phones and gnaw on bones,Insanity,is what i call my home
saw yer toes just 2 get your nerves working i got these nerds nervous.


i'll be back 2 add more
the entire thing was sick top to bottom really. i mean i have no complaints, the flow seemed pretty much flawless in ways, over all an enjoyrable read.
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'Awake or asleep,play with dreams,i'm the monster in the closet
obnoxious and i'm awesome capture your subconscious and toss it'

I like the way that flow, nice shit
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