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Re: new ideas
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idiot you have no reason to speak. till night falls
im heavy in the game and i might pause...befor i slice yall
streets like whitewalls
idiot you have no reason to speak. till night falls
im heavy in the game and i might pause...befor i slice yall
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Re: new ideas
1st - filtered sequences are cool and work well with each other but it needs another instrument to set it off
2nd - bass is way too loud, its distorting everything else, melodys kinda cool but its not very catchy, beats a way too simple the bass note needs to change and their needs to be more instrumentation
3rd - piano melodys cool, background sound fx doesn't add much probably sound better without them, bass sounds bad i'm guessing you just layered a bass note on the downbeat or with the kicks?, strings are cool, needs something else like a nice electric guitar coming on the hook to make it more dramatic sounding
2nd - bass is way too loud, its distorting everything else, melodys kinda cool but its not very catchy, beats a way too simple the bass note needs to change and their needs to be more instrumentation
3rd - piano melodys cool, background sound fx doesn't add much probably sound better without them, bass sounds bad i'm guessing you just layered a bass note on the downbeat or with the kicks?, strings are cool, needs something else like a nice electric guitar coming on the hook to make it more dramatic sounding
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Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Re: new ideas
cool thanks for the input
in a diss cypher, shit might just pop off, gotta take to the
streets like whitewalls
idiot you have no reason to speak. till night falls
im heavy in the game and i might pause...befor i slice yall
streets like whitewalls
idiot you have no reason to speak. till night falls
im heavy in the game and i might pause...befor i slice yall
Re: new ideas
changed that bass on the second one, working on it now
in a diss cypher, shit might just pop off, gotta take to the
streets like whitewalls
idiot you have no reason to speak. till night falls
im heavy in the game and i might pause...befor i slice yall
streets like whitewalls
idiot you have no reason to speak. till night falls
im heavy in the game and i might pause...befor i slice yall
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Re: new ideas
the 3rd one is dop-e fo a freestyle piece
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Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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