Teflon vs Jay Gunna(Jay Gunna)
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Teflon vs Jay Gunna(Jay Gunna)
10 Lines/5 Bars
First to 5 3-0=KO
No dickryding votes this kids 11-0 so no bullshit need all the help I can get haha
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I'll be droppin by tonight idc who drops first just drop soon.
First to 5 3-0=KO
No dickryding votes this kids 11-0 so no bullshit need all the help I can get haha
Check in required
I'll be droppin by tonight idc who drops first just drop soon.
Re: Teflon vs Jay Gunna
ima drop by tonight
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Re: Teflon vs Jay Gunna
No talk straight to the point...
Really, This kid is gay and his spits are played..Not nearly on cue
And my rhymes are sick with Aids..So yeah, I went Eazy on you
Don’t act like you get chicks, We know how gay dudes ride
This Gooney jumps in rooms with nude dudes like, HEY YOU GUYS!
And I know you're bring your 'A' game when u meddle with vets
You're staying on your toes, But it's time to give those stilettos a rest!!
Take this hollow tip along wit ya pride and swallow it..
I'd say you're off to a Rocky start..But your verse is A-pollo shit
*Let me finish this kid first loss coming now*
Practice your writing those tactics are wasted, every passage created mades to aggravate gay pricks
Shatter your frame with hatchet and blade tips, and you can just watch me sign my axe with your face bitch!!
Hope that's enough came as hard I could...Hope you drop tonight get the voting started...Goodluck man
Really, This kid is gay and his spits are played..Not nearly on cue
And my rhymes are sick with Aids..So yeah, I went Eazy on you
Don’t act like you get chicks, We know how gay dudes ride
This Gooney jumps in rooms with nude dudes like, HEY YOU GUYS!
And I know you're bring your 'A' game when u meddle with vets
You're staying on your toes, But it's time to give those stilettos a rest!!
Take this hollow tip along wit ya pride and swallow it..
I'd say you're off to a Rocky start..But your verse is A-pollo shit
*Let me finish this kid first loss coming now*
Practice your writing those tactics are wasted, every passage created mades to aggravate gay pricks
Shatter your frame with hatchet and blade tips, and you can just watch me sign my axe with your face bitch!!
Hope that's enough came as hard I could...Hope you drop tonight get the voting started...Goodluck man
Re: Teflon vs Jay Gunna
yo ima hit this up after work today...
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Re: Teflon vs Jay Gunna
Come on man a bunch of people have already prolly check this battle out they keep looking at it and my verse keeps looking older and older, I understand if ur busy man but you said you'd drop I did you didn't now you say today almost 8 come on homie...No biggy just making my verse loook old.
Re: Teflon vs Jay Gunna
Stop Crying Pussy...
Im Marvelous Ock Plus My Bizarre Spitting Stops..This Emcee From Committing Hard Hitting Shots/
Hard?...He Is Not...Cause Jay Quick To Rip Tef (teff) In Pieces As If I Was Harvesting Crops!!!//
Brace Yaself...And Be Prepared To Take An L...Cause Jay Aint Takin Bout Mobile Malfunctions When I Break Ya Cell!/
Swing At His Frame With A Bat Till His Face Is Swelled...He Got NWO In His Sig So We All Know Hes Fake As Hell!!!//
Leave Him Battered Wit Ease...Teflon Beating Jay? Hahaha Thats Laughter To Me...In Other Words You Suck And Ya Faggot Ass Team/
So Keep Running Ya Mouth And I'll Splatter Ya Spleen. Teflon's Rap Career In A Glass Box..So Watch Me Shatter His Dreams!!!///damn
blah blah blah/
blah blah blah//
I'll Break Ya Chest Jerk....Its Obvious That Jay Has The Best Verse/
So Watch As I Put A End To This Tef Lon (tough lawn) Like Landscaping Experts!!!//lol
vote up...
Hard?...He Is Not...Cause Jay Quick To Rip Tef (teff) In Pieces As If I Was Harvesting Crops!!!//
Brace Yaself...And Be Prepared To Take An L...Cause Jay Aint Takin Bout Mobile Malfunctions When I Break Ya Cell!/
Swing At His Frame With A Bat Till His Face Is Swelled...He Got NWO In His Sig So We All Know Hes Fake As Hell!!!//
Leave Him Battered Wit Ease...Teflon Beating Jay? Hahaha Thats Laughter To Me...In Other Words You Suck And Ya Faggot Ass Team/
So Keep Running Ya Mouth And I'll Splatter Ya Spleen. Teflon's Rap Career In A Glass Box..So Watch Me Shatter His Dreams!!!///damn
blah blah blah/
blah blah blah//
I'll Break Ya Chest Jerk....Its Obvious That Jay Has The Best Verse/
So Watch As I Put A End To This Tef Lon (tough lawn) Like Landscaping Experts!!!//lol
vote up...
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Re: Teflon vs Jay Gunna
Really, This kid is gay and his spits are played..Not nearly on cue
And my rhymes are sick with Aids..So yeah, I went Eazy on you
LMAO @ this line.. it was funny as fuck but it was kinda weak
Don’t act like you get chicks, We know how gay dudes ride
This Gooney jumps in rooms with nude dudes like, HEY YOU GUYS!
funny.. lmao but weak yo.. you should try to work
on more execution.. more creative concepts and etc..
And I know you're bring your 'A' game when u meddle with vets
You're staying on your toes, But it's time to give those stilettos a rest!!
LoL first nice line in your bar..
but try to lay off the gay jokes..don't be repetitive with them..
this was your best bar IMO...although it was kinda played..
Take this hollow tip along wit ya pride and swallow it..
I'd say you're off to a Rocky start..But your verse is A-pollo shit
hmm nah..this was creative..wording was good
but the build up was better then the punch nahh mean...
I Wasn't feeling this.. you have cool multis tho.. you dont really have feeler
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Im Marvelous Ock Plus My Bizarre Spitting Stops..This Emcee From Committing Hard Hitting Shots/
Hard?...He Is Not...Cause Jay Quick To Rip Tef (teff) In Pieces As If I Was Harvesting Crops!!!//
Pretty cool bar.. nice multis through the bar were nice..flowed smoothly
the set up was decent.. punch was pretty decent..
overall A Smooth Opener..nice...
Brace Yaself...And Be Prepared To Take An L...Cause Jay Aint Takin Bout Mobile Malfunctions When I Break Ya Cell!/
Swing At His Frame With A Bat Till His Face Is Swelled...He Got NWO In His Sig So We All Know Hes Fake As Hell!!!//
LoL...nice flow... concept was cool...creative.. but I think this was mediocre coming from you..
but chea...
Leave Him Battered Wit Ease...Teflon Beating Jay? Hahaha Thats Laughter To Me...In Other Words You Suck And Ya Faggot Ass Team/
So Keep Running Ya Mouth And I'll Splatter Ya Spleen. Teflon's Rap Career In A Glass Box..So Watch Me Shatter His Dreams!!!///damn
LoL I just realized your flow is long as hell...but it flows together and it isnt stretched but yeah
this line was a pretty coool universal...semi-decent punch..Could of been better
nice set up tho..creative..the sting seemed halfed tho..still a cool read tho
I'll Break Ya Chest Jerk....Its Obvious That Jay Has The Best Verse/
So Watch As I Put A End To This Tef Lon (tough lawn) Like Landscaping Experts!!!//
LoL...cool closer...simile punches are cool, so don't overload on them
alright closer... name play was predictable..but it was cool
Flow - Teflon
Multis - Jay..
Creativity -Jay...Tef kept coming at him with gay bars lol
Punches - Jay...pretty obvious IMO
Personals - N/a
V/JayGunna...this was an alright battle...pretty one sided..
jay gunna took this with lines with more sting...Teflon..keep at it my dude..and just elevate
And my rhymes are sick with Aids..So yeah, I went Eazy on you
LMAO @ this line.. it was funny as fuck but it was kinda weak
Don’t act like you get chicks, We know how gay dudes ride
This Gooney jumps in rooms with nude dudes like, HEY YOU GUYS!
funny.. lmao but weak yo.. you should try to work
on more execution.. more creative concepts and etc..
And I know you're bring your 'A' game when u meddle with vets
You're staying on your toes, But it's time to give those stilettos a rest!!
LoL first nice line in your bar..
but try to lay off the gay jokes..don't be repetitive with them..
this was your best bar IMO...although it was kinda played..
Take this hollow tip along wit ya pride and swallow it..
I'd say you're off to a Rocky start..But your verse is A-pollo shit
hmm nah..this was creative..wording was good
but the build up was better then the punch nahh mean...
I Wasn't feeling this.. you have cool multis tho.. you dont really have feeler
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Im Marvelous Ock Plus My Bizarre Spitting Stops..This Emcee From Committing Hard Hitting Shots/
Hard?...He Is Not...Cause Jay Quick To Rip Tef (teff) In Pieces As If I Was Harvesting Crops!!!//
Pretty cool bar.. nice multis through the bar were nice..flowed smoothly
the set up was decent.. punch was pretty decent..
overall A Smooth Opener..nice...
Brace Yaself...And Be Prepared To Take An L...Cause Jay Aint Takin Bout Mobile Malfunctions When I Break Ya Cell!/
Swing At His Frame With A Bat Till His Face Is Swelled...He Got NWO In His Sig So We All Know Hes Fake As Hell!!!//
LoL...nice flow... concept was cool...creative.. but I think this was mediocre coming from you..
but chea...
Leave Him Battered Wit Ease...Teflon Beating Jay? Hahaha Thats Laughter To Me...In Other Words You Suck And Ya Faggot Ass Team/
So Keep Running Ya Mouth And I'll Splatter Ya Spleen. Teflon's Rap Career In A Glass Box..So Watch Me Shatter His Dreams!!!///damn
LoL I just realized your flow is long as hell...but it flows together and it isnt stretched but yeah
this line was a pretty coool universal...semi-decent punch..Could of been better
nice set up tho..creative..the sting seemed halfed tho..still a cool read tho
I'll Break Ya Chest Jerk....Its Obvious That Jay Has The Best Verse/
So Watch As I Put A End To This Tef Lon (tough lawn) Like Landscaping Experts!!!//
LoL...cool closer...simile punches are cool, so don't overload on them
alright closer... name play was predictable..but it was cool
Flow - Teflon
Multis - Jay..
Creativity -Jay...Tef kept coming at him with gay bars lol
Punches - Jay...pretty obvious IMO
Personals - N/a
V/JayGunna...this was an alright battle...pretty one sided..
jay gunna took this with lines with more sting...Teflon..keep at it my dude..and just elevate
Alpha Bill: I told a girl I wanted to suck the juice out of her so she sat on my face today
Lmao Wierd ass Nigga
Lmao Wierd ass Nigga
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Re: Teflon vs Jay Gunna
Duce you know I had two more lines in this battle also idk if you missed them or just didn't bother to quote and review them the lines were....
*Practice your writing those tactics are wasted, every passage created mades to aggravate gay pricks
Shatter your frame with hatchet and blade tips, and you can just watch me sign my axe with your face bitch!!*
Aight nice verse Jay, 1-0 you keep the voting coming please.
*Practice your writing those tactics are wasted, every passage created mades to aggravate gay pricks
Shatter your frame with hatchet and blade tips, and you can just watch me sign my axe with your face bitch!!*
Aight nice verse Jay, 1-0 you keep the voting coming please.
Last edited by Teflon on Thu Apr 30, 2009 2:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Re: Teflon vs Jay Gunna
yo Could you go on the second page
And bump me Vs Kahlua.. i dropped my verse.. I'd appreciate it..
And bump me Vs Kahlua.. i dropped my verse.. I'd appreciate it..
Alpha Bill: I told a girl I wanted to suck the juice out of her so she sat on my face today
Lmao Wierd ass Nigga
Lmao Wierd ass Nigga
-.HaZarD.- wrote:I Want your Head.
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Re: Teflon vs Jay Gunna
Ight im new so imma explain my vote....
Teflon Lines:
Don’t act like you get chicks, We know how gay dudes ride
This Gooney jumps in rooms with nude dudes like, HEY YOU GUYS!
And I know you're bring your 'A' game when u meddle with vets
You're staying on your toes, But it's time to give those stilettos a rest!!
(thought they was ya best bars)
Jay Lines:
So Keep Running Ya Mouth And I'll Splatter Ya Spleen. Teflon's Rap Career In A Glass Box..So Watch Me Shatter His Dreams!!!/
I'll Break Ya Chest Jerk....Its Obvious That Jay Has The Best Verse/
So Watch As I Put A End To This Tef Lon (tough lawn) Like Landscaping Experts!!!//lol
(thought this was ya best bars)
Flow: Tef
Wordplay: Jay
Multies: Jay
Creativity: Jay
Excitement: Jay
Punches Jay
Vote: Jay Gunna
Reason:...i jus thought Jay brought it...his punches n wordplay was a beast in this battle...that was my decision
Teflon Lines:
Don’t act like you get chicks, We know how gay dudes ride
This Gooney jumps in rooms with nude dudes like, HEY YOU GUYS!
And I know you're bring your 'A' game when u meddle with vets
You're staying on your toes, But it's time to give those stilettos a rest!!
(thought they was ya best bars)
Jay Lines:
So Keep Running Ya Mouth And I'll Splatter Ya Spleen. Teflon's Rap Career In A Glass Box..So Watch Me Shatter His Dreams!!!/
I'll Break Ya Chest Jerk....Its Obvious That Jay Has The Best Verse/
So Watch As I Put A End To This Tef Lon (tough lawn) Like Landscaping Experts!!!//lol
(thought this was ya best bars)
Flow: Tef
Wordplay: Jay
Multies: Jay
Creativity: Jay
Excitement: Jay
Punches Jay
Vote: Jay Gunna
Reason:...i jus thought Jay brought it...his punches n wordplay was a beast in this battle...that was my decision
Re: Teflon vs Jay Gunna
I got it.. I Just didnt get to copy and paste it..Teflon wrote:Duce you know I had two more lines in this battle also idk if you missed them or just didn't bother to quote and review them the lines were....
*Practice your writing those tactics are wasted, every passage created mades to aggravate gay pricks
Shatter your frame with hatchet and blade tips, and you can just watch me sign my axe with your face bitch!!*
Aight nice verse Jay, 1-0 you keep the voting coming please.
Alpha Bill: I told a girl I wanted to suck the juice out of her so she sat on my face today
Lmao Wierd ass Nigga
Lmao Wierd ass Nigga
-.HaZarD.- wrote:I Want your Head.
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Re: Teflon vs Jay Gunna
thanks for the votes
2-0
2-0
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Re: Teflon vs Jay Gunna
Man thoguth I stood a chance, guess not lol...But uppin for a few more don't need to be koed, thanks for voting fellas
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Re: Teflon vs Jay Gunna
i'll vote if no one votes by tonight, uppin for the voters..
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