From The Lips Of The No Longer Broken.

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Re: From The Lips Of The No Longer Broken.

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Powerful words here, definitely. The line that stuck out the most to me as a single line was "I will not wipe away shards of your heart disguised as tears". But in reality, the whole drop was dope, could feel the self-reflection, the outward expression of the experience, the power of the emotion. Damn good poem...
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