You Life is Mine Pt.1

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You Life is Mine Pt.1

Post by *.HarleQuin.* »

everyone always wonders what a women thinks about when she finds her
bf/husband cheating..well this is what i think anyway..yeah im very bored
so don't quote me on the writing since i havent done this in months

i swear i would just..

disect your body without a piece of guilt to digest, i digress, off with
your head take a torch to the rest, in peace i sleep, why fret, no regret
you've got ur mother to weap. and if you don't die before i wake i
promise your life is mine to take
and the fact i was your chick is pretty self evident and even more
irrelevant to the fact im killin ya ass, diminishing your present and merkin
ya past, pierce ya retinas obstruct ya vision life elephant grass. leave u
slain on the operate table, end ya life steal ya birth right like im cain and your abel.
slice your balls invalidate your choice to birth like im against
abortion laws.
this deaths a routine surgery kinda like kanye west's mom,
ill discard your cheap bloody ass like a cardboard tampon. i aint God but your life
is mine to take, just like you felt this was ur heart to break.
ill take my chances at hell, im only 19, heaven can wait, fuck a new slate, try to
repent but you cant erase whats already been. sweet revenge, the doctor
tellin ya mom ur lifes at an end....


leave feed, ill finish at some other random time
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hmm...i like it...its got me wonderin now tho
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lmao wonderin about what
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if im gonna go make some food! ;) ...lol
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It was a Strait Piece.. Alotta Chicks Could Prolly Relate ..
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Post by Glamtrash »

Shit's strait...Exactly how I feel about most of the fucktards I was with.

ill take my chances at hell, im only 19, heaven can wait, fuck a new slate, try to
repent but you cant erase whats already been.
^^
That part stood out to me the most.
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Post by LadySam »

i liked this, and yea most girls would like it i think, because men are bastards? haha

disect your body without a piece of guilt to digest, i digress, off with
your head take a torch to the rest, in peace i sleep, why fret, no regret
you've got ur mother to weap. and if you don't die before i wake i
promise your life is mine to take

ill take my chances at hell, im only 19, heaven can wait, fuck a new slate, try to
repent but you cant erase whats already been.


fav two bits.

on ya sammi
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Post by Spoof »

nice piece, all I can say is WORD! lol :D
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