Not Too Drunk (When You Can Feel The World Revolve Around Yo

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Not Too Drunk (When You Can Feel The World Revolve Around Yo

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Too drunk to sleep,
and the heat of the house makes it harder.
Painted red nails
scratch the back until it is numb.
Can't feel anything that is meant to be felt.
Can't anyone tell when one is too drunk to be?
Can't walk, talk, or see.
Can't move at all.
Too drunk to lift a head,
and too drunk to blink.
But not too drunk to write,
and not too drunk to think.
But far too drunk for anything else.
When drunk other people seem like toys.
So fun, so sexy.
So now, everything seems good.
Because too drunk is fun,
and too drunk has no problems.
And too drunk to sleep is a good thing.
Too drunk to talk is no problem.
Too drunk to move could pose an issue.
But not too drunk to think and write
is the best thing that one can be.
Now go to sleep...
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Post by complexity »

Great structure and a cool drop.

I can relate.

Keep it up.
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