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Lawgix
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against me

everybody is against me am i a bad person?
everybody is against me did i hurt them?
everybody is against me am i your rock to lean on?
well if so u never show any help when i need one
everybody is against me am i an enemy?
if everybody is against me then why am i still so friendly?
everybody is against me i feel like shit
go ahead take ur shot heres my chin connect with a hit
everybody is against me no this isn't depression
since i feel everybody hates me this is only aggression
everybody is against me so i shall crawl back into my hole
since thats the only thing in the world that i could ever call home
everybody hates me is it because of the person i am?
does my attitude really show that i don't give a damn?
everybody is against me yet nobody cares
this world is so cold and its left me so bare
everybody is against me i am hated with scorn
grated with thorns shaded with mourn degraded and torn
everybody is against me so i'll just fade away
to never see another day never to breathe again my life has changed
nobodies against me when u say you love me
nobodies against me when u say u hold nothing above me
then again your the one against me with the knife in my back
you've been the one against me i only feel your attacks
your the one against me you've left me so scarred
and its because of you that my life feels so barred
i'm in a personal prison my tension is sifted
into my brain feels like i need a crane to lift it
i wasted what i was gifted with to help others in need
but why when this worlds filled with hatred and greed
these fakes around me actin like their my number one friend
damn near even kin and when i feel humble again
they kick and they spit i'm feelin like shit
this is it heres the clip barrel to my head and i just heard the first click
one bullet in the mag the chambers still empty
dangers still with me i'm a convict i'm still feelin guilty
with the last of the clicks i wipe the sweat off my brow
i'm happier now since i changed that last click to a...
Don't Let The Game Make U, Make Urself

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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

everybody is against me yet nobody cares
this world is so cold and its left me so bare
everybody is against me i am hated with scorn
grated with thorns shaded with mourn degraded and torn
everybody is against me so i'll just fade away

loved that part man^ and the ones jj quoted..why dont u drop more often?lol this was good..i liked it alot
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

sorry boutt he delay homie, this was pretty sollid i liked the emotions fam. felt it all the way thru

big ups
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Post by thatrisk »

this was cool to read thru i guess
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Post by Spoof »

I liked this one, the emotional part was good and the idea is nice. I bet all of us have felt like this at least once in our lifetime.

everybody hates me is it because of the person i am?
does my attitude really show that i don't give a damn?
everybody is against me yet nobody cares
this world is so cold and its left me so bare
everybody is against me i am hated with scorn
grated with thorns shaded with mourn degraded and torn
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