Victim of Lies

~*Blitz*~ · Post by **~*Blitz*~** » Sat Jan 06, 2007 12:18 pm

[font=Verdana][align=center]Drowning in the waters of a shallow sea,
Is a victim of lies, longing to be set free.
Suicide notes penned and then torn apart
Show the pain and anguish of a broken heart.
Seeking what cannot be found
Through self-inflicted death; can't turn around.
Can't turn back, though the lesson is learned
Though deception can kill; honesty is known to burn.
We must accept others for who we think they are.
Beneath the skin lies the spirit - It's not that far.
Be cautious when holding ones soul in your hands;
Be gentle. life it up above the water, carry it safely to land.
The spirit is a precious entity,
Make's up one's entire identity.
All too often they are unintentionally abused.
It's far to simple, for they are so easily bruised.
Take care to honor and revere those set before you,
Wherever you go, people sell thoughtfulness for free,
Right behind the newspaper stands on every street.
To many people accept the offer,
They should watch out - hearts break more quickly then cooper.
Be careful - although spirits aren't made of matter,
Just like glass they easily shatter[/align][/font]

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Sat Jan 06, 2007 12:27 pm

this wud prolly be considered a poem but i loved it anyways keep droppin and maybe sumtime u'll battle some1 and win! lol neva know but ye and read over the link thing 2 there pretty strict with it -1-

~*Blitz*~ · Post by **~*Blitz*~** » Sat Jan 06, 2007 12:29 pm

oops, I didnt see the area for poems until I tryed figuring out what the hell you were talking about...my bad. I woulda posted it there if I had seen it before.

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Sat Jan 06, 2007 12:33 pm

naw its koo right here is fine...but ye like i said nice drop keep writin

~*Blitz*~ · Post by **~*Blitz*~** » Sat Jan 06, 2007 12:35 pm

thank you sir <3

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Sat Jan 06, 2007 12:36 pm

lol no need ta say sir juz call me tramatik but yw

Borat · Post by **Borat** » Sat Jan 06, 2007 12:38 pm

Very Nice... Keep Posting

Subsist · Post by **Subsist** » Sat Jan 06, 2007 1:02 pm

Unlike tramatik , I demand being called sir.

~*Blitz*~ · Post by **~*Blitz*~** » Sat Jan 06, 2007 1:17 pm

well unlike tramatic, you dont deserve to be called sir because im not sure if you a dude

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Sat Jan 06, 2007 1:30 pm

Subsist wrote:Unlike tramatik , I demand being called sir.

no wonder u cant getta girl homie u tryna be all 'demanding' well i DEMAND u take that concited dick outta ur mouth n stop suckin those concited seeds that be planted in ur thick ass head -1-

Im sorry , can you please teach me how to get an E-Girlfriend please mister tramatik? I guess demanding is not the way, PLEASE TEACH ME I BEG YOU.

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Sat Jan 06, 2007 3:54 pm

Yoo Whuts Poppin Chick .. That Was A Nice Poem
Keep Droppin Feelin Ya Shit lol Keep Doin U
Its Lookin Good ...

Momeijah · Post by **Momeijah** » Sun Jan 07, 2007 3:02 am

Ok Ok Boys Keep ur Hands Outta ur Pants. Nice Poem Tho. Was Feelin it

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Sun Jan 07, 2007 5:57 am

i guess having a pink font doubles your amount of feedback on this site filled with lonely nerds lmao

Momeijah · Post by **Momeijah** » Sun Jan 07, 2007 6:37 am

LOL Word

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