Peace, Friendship, And Life

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Peace, Friendship, And Life

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Imagine an intention so pure, a baby could drink it
Imagine a thought so kind, nobody could speak it
Now Imagine, a time, a place and a spot
where Peace, Friendship, and Life didn't cost a whole lot
we live in a town where hopes and aspirations
are told as jokes and most dreams have been assassinated
we don't walk on egg shells, they'd only crack
we stab our feet with broken glass on the pavement
it's just one of those places if you left you wouldn't come back
it's one of those areas that looks better on a map
when I was growing up, I saw it with childish eyes
I thought it was beautiful, now I wish it would just die
I only have a few close ones, and I hold them real tight
because honestly, without them I wouldn't want to live this life.

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Re: Peace, Friendship, And Life

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"Imagine an intention so pure, a baby could drink it
Imagine a thought so kind, nobody could speak it"

nice ^^^^


my favorite;
"we live in a town where hopes and aspirations
are told as jokes and most dreams have been assassinated
we don't walk on egg shells, they'd only crack
we stab our feet with broken glass on the pavement
it's just one of those places if you left you wouldn't come back"

loved it!
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Re: Peace, Friendship, And Life

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DEEEEEP
Shits DEEEP

Still going deeper


DEEEEEEP!!!

lol

nah this piece was good man.. highly enjoyable some real good observations made personal.. i think a lot of people can relate to the content and agree with the message..

keep writing nice to see ya dropping something
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Dope piece Plex no doubt about it, i havent been feeding anyone lol but this shit i had to get to feeding, very dope, the rhymes were interpolated from one line to another keeping them switching i felt anyway, and they were quite profound as well so i loved the piece no doubt about it, good to still see you dropping fire Plex
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Beautiful.

And THIS is why you should write more often, dude! Fucking lovely.

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Thanks Shanda and others!

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complexity wrote:Now Imagine, a time, a place and a spot
where Peace, Friendship, and Life didn't cost a whole lot
we live in a town where hopes and aspirations
are told as jokes and most dreams have been assassinated
damn.... thats exactly how i see it as well... this was deep Plex... good stuff bro... really good stuff well worth the read... i like reading ur drops cuz their smooth as hell man... good shit
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