Why?

[complexity]

we slept together, layed together
prayed together, played together
if only you would have stayed forever
instead you pulled the lever
now we are going to the grave together
wipe off the dust at the cemetary
when I look at you squarely
I can recognize you barely
werent we going to get married?
now you want me buried?
whisper to me tell me a secret
put down the weapon you dont need it
I pleaded but you wouldnt listen
you wanted me dead with no-ones permission
im wishing you would just laugh
them minutes blissfully past
creativity is what history lacks
cant reattach the pieces, broken puzzles
lay peaceless like the middle east is
we reach this inevitable deepness
trying to speak with words that are speechless
you cant see this through a tornado of emotions
every conversation is to in-depth like oceans
we are stuck in the crest, with no-one to save us
i dont love you, im just working with what "god" gave us
jumping through a hoop of fire is dangerous
we ran through the fortress of hell can you blame us
where torcher just felt normal, pain was lust
savoured every grain of dust, from the rain n gust
i must say in retrospect its to much to bare to write
days went by like nights without any glare of light
you all know what im talking about? LIFE

[Borat]

Here we go...Complexity every poem iv'e seen from you is full of emotion, i can tell that every thing you write about is from the heart i love you work keep it up "cant reattach the pieces, broken puzzles
lay peaceless like the middle east is
we reach this inevitable deepness
trying to speak with words that are speechless" thats my favorite part good stuff 'thanks for the post'

[Mac]

Good Shit Man..This Is Some Tyle Shit I'd Like To Here In Audio..Even Though It's A Poem It's Got More Of A Flow To It. Good Shit Though Man, Good Emotion, Everything. Keep It Up.

[complexity]

thanks, it would be nice if i would have spent a little more time on it, because i love the concept.

[-TraMaTiK-]

wow dude...mad imagery...like woaH lol nice ish 4 real i give it like a 9/10 kep droppin it likes it hot lol -1-