Time

[thaphantom]

As I watch the hands on the clock go by.
I just sit here ask and wonder why?
I'm in denial from everything and my life is slowly crashing.
Honestly I just don't know how, why, or when it happened.
I'm Just listening to the Ticks.
While i'm watching the clocks.
I'm dizzy feeling really sick.
Wondering will the pain stop.
Am I the same "Scott" or just have I matured in many different ways.
With a burning passion the flames haven't stopped and i'm in a daze.
Do you feel amazed to see that i'm expressing the truth?
I feel broke up like i've been left in more then just two.
It all happened once I realized that not everything in this world is meant to be.
But I got one good thing in my life now just hoping that is was really left for me.
More of a better half or the worst misery?
This really better last it feels good for me.
Haven't expressed the real me in almost half a year.
I haven't felt this exact way before no time to shed a tear.
I've counted down for 3 months 4 days and 18 hours to the point of something that seems real.
The truth is will i ever know when time is really up or is it just going to keep sealed.
Am I going to need healed? or will there forever be something there.
The way I completly feel is like there's no other person who cares.
I'm feeling bare it's seems like i'm goin' to stay hurt.
Everything that's there seems like it's going to work.
Is time just ticking or will we last forever?
Cause honestly I just pray that we stay together.

Haven't wrote in a long time....What you think?

[complexity]

This was really good. Sometimes when you write your rhymes get so sloppy that it ruins the emotion that you put into everything you write. Not this time though.

It all happened once I realized that not everything in this world is meant to be.
But I got one good thing in my life now just hoping that is was really left for me.

Deep Shit - Uppin This For More Feedback

[Conspiracy]

Yeah i agree with tom since i last saw a piece from you this is alot better dope shit keep it up

[16 Micz]

i liked it, um it sounded more like a rap to me but hey, and uhh the story was pretty nice to, you always have some pussy shit to write about, lol jk good job though, long time no see.

[thaphantom]

Thanks kid.....and u said it sounded more like a rap for the fact that it had more ryhmes in it.....and i mean it's what ever you say it was pussy shit.....but it's just writings well anyways peace