about this site freestyle

[KING RUM12]

HEY FUCK U GUYS Y DIDNT U TELL ME ABOUT THIS SITE BEFORE...I PROLLY WUD HV BEEN HERE BEFORE I WUZ 4...ITS SUPER POPPIN N IM DIGGIN U GUYZES FLOETRY...IMA POET TOO BUT I JUS THOUGHT ID SEND A NOTARY...THIS TOPICS PROLLY GONNA GET REMOVED CUZ ITS NOT POETRY...IM SORRY IF MY CONDUCT IS DISORDERLLY...IF UR FROM THE WOOD U PROLLY HEARD OF ME...I CASTRATE RAPPERS FOR EVEN IMAGING THEY CUD MURDER ME...WAKE UP FROM THAT DREAM SWEATIN HORRIBLY...THEN ILL JUMP OUTTA UR CLOSET AND STAB U HOREDLY...2 SWITCH BLADES N U AINT STOPPIN THIS ...CUTTIN ALL VITAL POINTS BUT IM AIMIN FOR UR ESOPHAGUS ...LAST WORDS WERE I AM NOT A BITCH...BUT I TREAT U LIKE IT NE WAY.....I HATE MY LIFE I MIGHT BE EVICTED TODAY...

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[Blake Downs]

you got some bars rum,
my only advice now is to,

make the structure of your verses like this,
you can edit and fix it,it makes it so much easier

[KING RUM12]

Appreciate the feedback n advice...
It is easier

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