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No Breaking Light

Posted: Mon May 30, 2011 4:16 pm
by MonuMental
No light through yonder window breaks, only glass leaving me blind,
The threshhold yields only dust; only dusk whispers so sweetly,
No fight for this to hold you now, to force is so unkind,
I feel the floor beneath my face, my salts clean discreetly,
Would you go, would you wait, for none if not who held you dear,
I count the petals one by one, chances reel at every fall,
This I know, discount my fate, resigned to yearn for you near,
Announce my haste to renounce the sun, a tactic for your call,
Ever so kindly you let me down, I dashed you to the rocks,
Your lies are the sweetest, your lips aren't far behind,
Rivers flow blindly to where I rest, no love to greet me knocks,
Love pries deeply, writing neatest on scripts now out of time,
The trees shed coats as I don mine, waiting, watching, in repose,
Bleed the life to change the year, hello my new goodbye,
I plead with me to take the time, wait to first move slow,
Greed for strife wrought from fear, echoes with a lover's cries. ... 22139.html ... 22306.html

Re: No Breaking Light

Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 3:27 am
by Vohkab
i liked this, it's classic style, but i dug what you were conveying. good job.

Re: No Breaking Light

Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 3:45 am
by MonuMental
Appreciate it, man.