No Breaking Light

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MonuMental
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No Breaking Light

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No light through yonder window breaks, only glass leaving me blind,
The threshhold yields only dust; only dusk whispers so sweetly,
No fight for this to hold you now, to force is so unkind,
I feel the floor beneath my face, my salts clean discreetly,
Would you go, would you wait, for none if not who held you dear,
I count the petals one by one, chances reel at every fall,
This I know, discount my fate, resigned to yearn for you near,
Announce my haste to renounce the sun, a tactic for your call,
Ever so kindly you let me down, I dashed you to the rocks,
Your lies are the sweetest, your lips aren't far behind,
Rivers flow blindly to where I rest, no love to greet me knocks,
Love pries deeply, writing neatest on scripts now out of time,
The trees shed coats as I don mine, waiting, watching, in repose,
Bleed the life to change the year, hello my new goodbye,
I plead with me to take the time, wait to first move slow,
Greed for strife wrought from fear, echoes with a lover's cries.
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[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
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Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

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Re: No Breaking Light

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i liked this, it's classic style, but i dug what you were conveying. good job.
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Re: No Breaking Light

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Appreciate it, man.
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
[center]Image[/center]
[center]Image[/center]
[center]Image[/center]
[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

[center]a-series-of-unfortunate-events-vt23866.html[/center]
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