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Escape the madness in entrapped in,a bombardment of insanity. I cant help being me or these things they comprise. The worlds lights reflected in dark eyes summarize the distance between me and truth in the span of time. Hypnotized and mesmarized by a sea of convulted ashtrays and lies,tear to shreds whats in this womans eyes. Hearts free to fly,leave this plane,leave this existance, no bounds to earth,fluid like friction resistance. It still hurts running miles endless,dash at full speeed,into absence,nothing not a thing worthy to achieve,not a thing worthy to believe,fuck this world...


Just a sample,its not a whole piece but its been forever and i dont remember alot of my work.

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Nice. Format makes it kind of hard to read but i'm diggin' this. Good vocab and pretty deep.
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yeah i could have formatted it better,like i said just a sample...

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nice
"wHO THE hELL DO yOU THInK yOU ARE, jESUS mUTHA FuCKA????"

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