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this list consists of a diss
brought upon by a dude and a chick
that will remain nameless till the end of this
always talkin his shit, sayin "she sucked me" or "i fucked my chick"
while this dude sat on the other end sayin "you make me sick"
see this dude lives in an inbread town not as a hick
but some bitch thinkin hes "gangster" cause he owns a gun with some empty clips
thats placed inside of his crib, walkin around like he some type of blood or crip

his lip is what aggrivates people the most
when he sits behind a screen and gloats about how many whack songs hes wrote
he provokes people like their worthless and jokes, like hes on a fuckin roast
when hes talkin about himself, thinkin hes smart, theres nothin that this kid knows
so he boasts blokes, disses and pokes, at the expence of other individuals,
who know they can make this kid choke, with no rope
they just wanna see him drown in his words, and slit his own throat
commit is own career suicide, without ever leavin a simple note

this kids rediculous, ownin people like hes the king of them
and always wantin favors, but never returns any gratitude for his "friends"
but in the end him and his girl, will need some type of defence
against the people hes dissed, and leave them scared and shook jumpin over de-fence
his homies that he chats with ain't shit, especially one known as "One Ridikulous kiD"
whos a rider in his click, thinkin "this dudes the shit" but really he just wants a peice of his fuckin dick
isn't ignorance purely bliss?

but this dude pushed the line, likes hes done time after time
and ran his mouth off, over a diss he heard that made him cry
called his alibies, and told em all a bunch of lies
so they can look at the other dude, with pure hate, evil and demise
but hes knows hes a drama setter, thats all hes ever good for despite
thinks that hes nice, with the lyrics he writes, and talks shit on a kid hes never seen with his own eyes

but i think hes realized, thru all the shit that hes composed
that this dude isn't playin, and that if he ever sees him, he'll break his fuckin nose
brought it to his attention, that he was a better artist and that he knows
he didn't have nothin to say, left speechless at his own post

this dude isn't shit, with no job or car
still lives with his mom, hes 20 thinkin he'll go far
when he sits down, opens up word pad and writes out a couple bars
records half and says "i'll do the rest of it tomorrow"
and never attempts it again, cause he knows hes pitiful, and drowns in his own sorrow
goes to his aunt for some money he can borrow, and buys his girl a present, so she can go "gulp swallowed"

this couple, is quite honestly, fuckin stupid
cause they met on the internet, and all of a sudden they were hit by cupid
but its all a conspiracy, to turn their backs on the ones they use to kick it with
over some stupid shit, a peice of pussy, some tits, and an over-used aids infested nasty lil dick

no jealousy isn't what this dude feels, for real
cause both of them could die now, he wouldn't cry a river of tears
over a couple queers, who appear to look like their feared
like their bonnie and clyde reborn, only 2006 is the year

causin a ruckus on some chat lines, so they can look hard and raw
but when ur face to face with em, all u see em do is drop their jaw
and not say a fuckin word, cause their speechless u even showed up at all
they drop their raw, so they'd like to drop their pants for ya'll
but they some nasty fuckin people, the stench of them would make rotten eggs smell tasty dawg

i know i said i'd leave this poem with some names
but i don't play their games, but the fact remains the same
that if ur pushin for fame, and u know ur fuckin lame
u won't get far, if u don't do shit in the game
i feel ashamed, for ever sayin their names
so i guess thats why i won't say them now, feel blessed, ya'll were saved
so heres some revenge, from this dude, that ya'll don't have to take
heres their myspaces, so u can see for urself who i fuckin blame

http://www.myspace.com/chinkiechinkiebetch
http://www.myspace.com/macbrutality
http://www.myspace.com/onediversekid (on the changes track "bitch" on the first verse, the other dude "who i'm dissin" is second)

fuck with me now bitches...
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Post by drunken jesus »

uh what makes this a poem? their's nothing poetic about it

not too many standout lines, rhyme scheme was weak

should just record a diss at him with all the shit hes talked to you, you obviously got a mic cause dude was posting your tracks
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by Onediversekid »

lmao omg! oh and thanks for putting up my myspace ...lol
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Post by Onediversekid »

i don't even know what 2 say about that.......that had to be the worst thing i've ever read ............diss me in a track man..don't write some gay ass rhyming poem ..it's ridikulous! haha lol :)
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oh yeah...get ur facts straight man..cuz pretty much that shit made no sense 2 me...and your supposed to be dissing me and mac..haha okiei then
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Lmao! Are You Serious Duke? Like Iron Solomon Ya Talk Is Pussy If I Cut Out Ya Tongue You'd Bleed Period Juice..

Man Fuck Out Of Here With That Shit, I Don't Even Come To This Site An You Got My Name Written All Over It. You're non Stop On My Dick lmao. Are You One Of Them Closet Faggots? Cuz Word Has It You're Mean To the Ones You Love An You're Fuckin Obssessed With Me Duke. Get A Fuckin Life, Better Yet Stop Rappin An Get A Job. An I Hope Like Roomer Has It Ya Fat ass Aint Quit To Rap, Cuz You'd Be A Bum The Rest Of Ya Pathetic Life Homie..lmaoooo
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

Shit long time no see "FLAWLESS", where you been at, and why yall beefin?
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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To Be Honest, I Don't Know. An Honestly Duke is 21 Years Old, He Act Like He Younger Then Me An I'm 17. My Name Come Out his Mouth Every 2 Sentences Like He Go To Sleep Thinkin About Me An Wake up Thinkin About Me..lol Dude Is Wack I Feel I Don't Gotta Reply To Dukes Disses Cuz They Don't Offend Me I'm Embarressed That Duke Releases Em'..But Anyway..Shit What's Good? I Changed Emails Man my New Shit's EatAyDick@gmail.com If You WAnna Add me..But Word Be eAsy
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FlawLess wrote:Lmao! Are You Serious Duke? Like Iron Solomon Ya Talk Is Pussy If I Cut Out Ya Tongue You'd Bleed Period Juice..

Man Fuck Out Of Here With That Shit, I Don't Even Come To This Site An You Got My Name Written All Over It. You're non Stop On My Dick lmao. Are You One Of Them Closet Faggots? Cuz Word Has It You're Mean To the Ones You Love An You're Fuckin Obssessed With Me Duke. Get A Fuckin Life, Better Yet Stop Rappin An Get A Job. An I Hope Like Roomer Has It Ya Fat ass Aint Quit To Rap, Cuz You'd Be A Bum The Rest Of Ya Pathetic Life Homie..lmaoooo
lmmfao okay... i got a job, i got a car, i'm about to move to michigan, got money saved up, and ur called me a bum? what u got man? show me what u got. u STILL in kentucky gettin aid from ur moms, and when u comin to missouri???? hahahaha worthless peice of shit get a life. and u know why were beefin. go cry.
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and tyler, ur just lame wheres the audio KID????
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Post by drunken jesus »

lawgix you 21 and rhyming like that homie? you really need to step your rhyming game up, enroll in viral or precise school they'll help you out
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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LMAO @ Drunken Jesus.. Word! Duke's Mad Wack Huh? lmao..

As Far Me Crying, Not Likely Your Disses Are My Entertainment. Oh An LMAO @ You Going To Michigan, That Prolly Aint The Best Idea Man;) lol. An Why You Hatin Cuz I'm In Kentucky? You Know Where I'm From, Stop Frontin Carry. I Remember Back When You WAs Spose To Come To Cleveland An You Was Tellin Me How You was Scared An Shit, You Little Pussy. Stop Actin Hard on This Site, You're 21 , You Got No Game, Your Wack, You're A Hillbilly From SILEX Missouri, Get Real Man.. What Rapper You Know That's From SILEX Missouri, My Mamma More Ganster Then You..lmaoooo An All That Talk About Me Livin At home, I'm 17 You Wack Faggot, You're 21 Just NOW Movin Out? LMAO!!! Tell Ya Mamma I Said Hey..lol
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My Fault I Wanna Clear This Up Too Carry..

About This Garbage You're Talkin About Breakin my Nose an Some Other Boo Hoo Shit, Homie lol Quit With All The Tough Talk, If We Meet In The Street We'll Settle It Then..
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Post by Onediversekid »

Word Mac !! lmao Oh And Carey the audio is coming don't you worry :) haha
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