1st Poem i Wrote Lol

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1st Poem i Wrote Lol

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Well its inspired By The Movie "a Clockwork Orange". Basically About The Human Race Will Not Be Like robots And Orders Are Never Gnna Be Followed. And About Temptation Of Revenge But How it Can Only Be a Temporary Satisfaction And Can Come Back 2 Haunt u in The Long Term. So Basically its Based On That Movie Lol.

"Satisfaction-And-Greed", Mix When it "Comes-To-a-Crossroads" ..//
"Hacking-Plants-At-The-Seed", When u Can "Run-From-The-Cost-So" ..//
"Knowing-Enemies-is-Vital", Wits Can "Change-a-Man's-Fate" ..//
"Throwing-Felonies-All-Night-Long", Turn To "Face-a-Blank-Page" ..//
"Paths-Are-Chosen".."Raps-And-Poems".."Lap-The-Moments".."While-it-Lasts" ..//
"Attack-The-Coldness".."Slap-The-Flows" Onto The "Pad-Of-Broken-Hopelessness" ..//
Anything Goes..in a World Thats "Known-To-Be-Under-Heaven" ..//
Making The Most Of Little Resources "So-To-See-Thunder-Tellin" ..//
That Control Remains Above Us..We're All idle "Until-We-Make-it" ..//
"Choosing Directions".."Losing-Thy-Blessings".."it's-Apparent-Death-is-Facing-Us" ..//
"Lose-My-Complexion"..But Remaining "This-a-Far-And-Vengeful-Place-We-Must" ..//
Work Hardest To Stay Even With God..My Point is "We're-Dealt-The-Same-Hands" ..//
Some Decide The Way To Go is Health..Others "Are-Meant-To-Stay-Bad" ..//
The World Will Never Be What We Make Of it, Face it People Are "Not-Domestic" ..//
We'll "Talk-The-Best-Shit"..Over Years, While Others Will "Rot-in-Cells-Sick" ..//
The Opportunity Was Given And improving From "Scratch-is-Vital" ..//
Situations Arise For individuals But Try To Out "Match-Your-Rivals" ..//
Revenge is Sweet, Satisfying, But it Can "Cost-You-Over-Time" ..//
Take The High Road, And Beat Them Over Time, And Sleep in a "Coffin-Old-n-Fine" ..//
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Dope poem Man!
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not bad....
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o0o0o Domino NIce Man feelin it keep at it homie --1--
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Post by complexity »

I liked it as well.
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Nice.
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Post by drunken jesus »

good shit looked more like a rap verse than a poem though

ill rhyme scheme
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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i Don't Remember Writing This Shit, Pretty Good Though i Could Redo it a Lot Better Now.
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then do it!lol
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No im Too Lazy Plus i Think im Gnna Quit Rapping it Bores Me Unless im Dissing/Battling Someone.
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then go after sum1 like that jack-off kid lol
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Lazy? i Just Signed Up For Guitar Lessons Today So That is My New Hobby.
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haha nicce
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