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just reading a few of these poetry drops got me thinking.

Eclusion,wait, what is eclusion/
the state of being excommunicated//
an axeity of thought lead by delusion/
loneleness,a lust to be accumulated//
a feeling of emptyness,with no friends/
a pain that speads with each heartbeat//
uselessness, a soul bound for odds and ends/
changing until your heart is of concrete//
hatred to all that dont give you acceptance/
do it on your own, a deciteful roque//
till your soul lifts and you have acendance/
this then leads to a bannisment of exlusion, very much in
vogue//
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Dude, this was sweet, you should think more lol.

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i'm with them. continue with this shit lol... not bad at all. I must say I'm glad this section's finally icked u.

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