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Stoned For My Thoughts Cooked In A Pot Of Heresy
Sons Have Blazed With Me And Begged Beliefs,
Plagued By Priest Thats Converting The Weakened,
Ignorant And Strickened With Mental Slavery
Theres No Faith In Me Beyond What My Eyes Can See
Still The Raiths N Fiends Reach And Touch Profecy
An Enlightened Beign Didnt Need To Part The Sea
Ta Take Part In The..Biggest Mockery In History
Its Destiny's PreConceived Notions Of What Can Be
Y Scrape Ta Breathe If I Believe That Life's Pre Achieved
Whats The Use Of Dreams If When I Leave I Breach Eternal Sleep
How Can I Rest in Piece When The Devils Reach
Is Apparently Gripped To Me Like Shackles To Feet
Am I Really Free If Sin Brings A Sense Of Open Wings
And Everything Kept Sacredly Is A Waste Of Profecy?
Fall With Me Wholeheartedly Into The Parting Breeze
As Life Rapidly Enacts Reality Inta My Dream's Cavity
Kick Start A Beat, Its Imagery Paints A Masterpiece
Conquest Will Spread The True Measure Of Blessed
No Tears N Sweat, Years Of Regret Or Seers Torment
Need To Repent Or Feed Serpents With Tricks For Debt
Words Mis-Interpreted Inside My Head, Mind'swell Be Lead
I Wont Be Mislead Ill Wait For Death To Waste My Breath

-- Tue Oct 12, 2010 7:10 pm --

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Re: I Believe

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"Theres No Faith In Me Beyond What My Eyes Can See
Still The Raiths N Fiends Reach And Touch Profecy
An Enlightened Beign Didnt Need To Part The Sea
Ta Take Part In The..Biggest Mockery In History
Its Destiny's PreConceived Notions Of What Can Be
Y Scrape Ta Breathe If I Believe That Life's Pre Achieved"

^^ I like that whole part right there, Like rugged said it does seem like you're lost at parts. but It does have an overall feel to it, I think it was worth the read. possibly you could clean it up a bit and drop it as a rap! that would be tight shit.
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