Grandma

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Grandma

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i'm drippin tears smearin my ink on the page
cause you passed away
thinkin of the things i'll never get to say
always so far away, so i never got to save a day
to talk to you and reminiss on your younger days
i find myself hurt inside
cause you died, and at first i couldn't cry
it took a minute for it to hit my mind
but now the thoughts are slowin time
it reminds me that in life you can't rewind
with out you i couldnt be here at all
all i think of is why i never called
i seemed to have forgot to pause
so ubsorbed in my problems i never stopped at all
now i bawl cause i miss my grandma
but i know that you loved me and i do too
i mourn with watery eyes without a tissue
i miss you its true
.....................memories i gota sift through
Grandma i love you and i'll never forget you
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Meaningful
i find myself hurt inside
cause you died, and at first i couldn't cry
it took a minute for it to hit my mind
but now the thoughts are slowin time
it reminds me that in life you can't rewind
Felt Thee Emotion
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Yea this piece is really emotionally driven
I don't want to nitpick at it cuz thats ur feelings
and you showed that you know how to express them
a heartfelt piece man....keep dropping
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Re: Grandma

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This Is Def A Piece Created from emotion. Like rugged said it was simple.. But Sometimes Simple Is The Way To Unload.. Raw Emotion Could Hit Harder Than Any Word Play When Its Delivered The Right Way.. Especially If The Feelings Are Real.. Tho Its Not Overly Impressive I Would Stand By This Piece In Its Simplicity Due To Its Raw Emotion
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