Cherry Pie

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Cherry Pie

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Allow me to dive in your dreams
ice cream, you cream, whip'd cream
alas the powder is on my lips
like krispy kreme donuts, I...dip
I dance in your melody of texture
as you warm up, and rise off pressure
you give me pleasure, ooo's and ahh's
she jam'd to my CD, Fu-gee-la
I awoke, to coffee stains and such
o my lovely, you cuff'd me, chains of love
in my apron, I see you, souflee'n up
with your sisters swimming, saying, taste this lust
I'm drawn away, please don't take my brush
I stroke the top with buttery soil
a cherry on top, it's other worldly foil
heated and wrap'd you make me messy
under my nose, I can pinpoint you freshly
poke your middle hole and slide in slow
lost in a sea of sauce, my knife is close
OUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!
it's still not the perfect time to go
will I take you in my mouth, only time will know
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I can pinpoint you freshly poke your middle hole and slide in slow
lost in a sea of sauce


Haha. This was kool. Like ice cream porn

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thank you my friend
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I dance in your melody of texture
as you warm up, and rise off pressure
you give me pleasure, ooo's and ahh's
Lmao!
heated and wrap'd you make me messy
under my nose, I can pinpoint you freshly
poke your middle hole and slide in slow
lost in a sea of sauce, my knife is close
OUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!
I swear food looking sexy to me now lol... i think u been spending too much time at work my dude... i also think this off the wall shit is great...ups for creativity..
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:eek: lmao :eek:
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Yeah it is. It had alot of a poetic vibe to the whole piece. It was good and different, which is always cool. Keep pressing bro. This couldve been longer btw. You shouldve went all out on this topic.
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