Determine Ya Hell
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Determine Ya Hell
With a Brush with no paint Words Evoke faith
A revoked Pass N Ta heaven theres Closed Gates
Sneak in The Back Way Sins Repent thru Confessing
Foot Prints Of Two Left Feet the..The Devil Does Carry
The load of the world..Is that not Why he's Burried?
Angelic Amendments Even In Heaven Theres Hatin..
Was his name Not Lucifer That Of A Beautiful Angel?
Power Done Maimed Him Scarred Limbs Callin Em Satan
Jealous Of Great Things Degrading The Great Wings
Got what Hes Cravin, An Empire In Hell But Its Flaming
Rings Bells In ya Vision?..Cuz Thru Sinnin We Heading
To Suffer a Wedding Marry a Soul Ta Eternal Enslavement
Da Worth Of Ya Faith Is Concrete as The Pavement
Or The Lack Of Its Wieght You Can Use As Ya Payment
Determine Ya Hell Thru The Sins That You Came Wit
Im Living In Mines Thank GOD Im A PAGAN...
A revoked Pass N Ta heaven theres Closed Gates
Sneak in The Back Way Sins Repent thru Confessing
Foot Prints Of Two Left Feet the..The Devil Does Carry
The load of the world..Is that not Why he's Burried?
Angelic Amendments Even In Heaven Theres Hatin..
Was his name Not Lucifer That Of A Beautiful Angel?
Power Done Maimed Him Scarred Limbs Callin Em Satan
Jealous Of Great Things Degrading The Great Wings
Got what Hes Cravin, An Empire In Hell But Its Flaming
Rings Bells In ya Vision?..Cuz Thru Sinnin We Heading
To Suffer a Wedding Marry a Soul Ta Eternal Enslavement
Da Worth Of Ya Faith Is Concrete as The Pavement
Or The Lack Of Its Wieght You Can Use As Ya Payment
Determine Ya Hell Thru The Sins That You Came Wit
Im Living In Mines Thank GOD Im A PAGAN...
Last edited by FlipSide on Sat Jun 19, 2010 3:44 am, edited 1 time in total.
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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̿ ̿'̿'\̵͇̿̿\з=(•̪•)=ε/̵͇̿̿/'̿'̿ ̿ -
Re: Determine Ya Hell
Dude this is dope man. Usually I don't like religious stuff but this gets it done son
Foot Prints Of Two Left Feet the..The Devil Does Carry The load of the world..Is that not Why he's Burried?
That line really made me think. Write more write now
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Foot Prints Of Two Left Feet the..The Devil Does Carry The load of the world..Is that not Why he's Burried?
That line really made me think. Write more write now
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I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
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That Was DOPE.. Flip You've Come Along Way. I See Your Elevation Keep It ^ (No Caps Don't Wanna Be Hatin' LMAO)Foot Prints Of Two Left Feet the..The Devil Does Carry
The load of the world..Is that not Why he's Burried?
Angelic Amendments Even In Heaven Theres Hatin..
Was his name Not Lucifer That Of A Beautiful Angel?
Power Done Maimed Him Scarred Limbs Callin Em Satan
Jealous Of Great Things Degrading The Great Wings
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Re: Determine Ya Hell
You're filthyWas his name Not Lucifer That Of A Beautiful Angel?
Power Done Maimed Him Scarred Limbs Callin Em Satan
Jealous Of Great Things Degrading The Great Wings
Got what Hes Cravin, An Empire In Hell But Its Flaming
Rings Bells In ya Vision?..Cuz Thru Sinnin We Heading
To Suffer a Wedding Marry a Soul Ta Eternal Enslavement
Da Worth Of Ya Faith Is Concrete as The Pavement
Or The Lack Of Its Wieght You Can Use As Ya Payment
Determine Ya Hell Thru The Sins That You Came Wit
Im Living In Mines Thank GOD Im A PAGAN...
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You're filthyWas his name Not Lucifer That Of A Beautiful Angel?
Power Done Maimed Him Scarred Limbs Callin Em Satan
Jealous Of Great Things Degrading The Great Wings
Got what Hes Cravin, An Empire In Hell But Its Flaming
Rings Bells In ya Vision?..Cuz Thru Sinnin We Heading
To Suffer a Wedding Marry a Soul Ta Eternal Enslavement
Da Worth Of Ya Faith Is Concrete as The Pavement
Or The Lack Of Its Wieght You Can Use As Ya Payment
Determine Ya Hell Thru The Sins That You Came Wit
Im Living In Mines Thank GOD Im A PAGAN...
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Thanks for the peep Rip..Creative N Catch
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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̿ ̿'̿'\̵͇̿̿\з=(•̪•)=ε/̵͇̿̿/'̿'̿ ̿ -
Re: Determine Ya Hell
just the way you said that made me believe this was a epic pieceFlipSide wrote:Thanks for the peep Rip..Creative N Catch
you sir are the man no matter what you write
lulz but seriously...this was a dope piece
religion is always a good subject to touch on
but some people are too bias, either way keep it up man
you did your thing, nice to see you expand your lyricism
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Re: Determine Ya Hell
flip this is good , i liked your choice of words and structure
nice bars i agree with creative on the part he says was "DOPE" .
it's good
5/5
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nice bars i agree with creative on the part he says was "DOPE" .
it's good
5/5
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Re: Determine Ya Hell
Very good imagery the foot prints with 2 left feetfor sure best line. With heaven and hell raps or poems its a hit or a miss. I'd say that was a bunt.
Im Living In Mines Thank GOD Im A PAGAN... that's a funny ass oxymoron.
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Im Living In Mines Thank GOD Im A PAGAN... that's a funny ass oxymoron.
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Re: Determine Ya Hell
Controversial issue (when delivered properly) = automatic win. It started off kind of slow and I thought I was going to hate it but you killed 2/3 of it and the closer made me giggle. I was surprised at how much you've elevated. Good job. BUT you need to work on your structure and grammar.
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^ <3 she leaves the BEST feed. My poems miss you FL
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POET OF THE YEAR 2011
I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
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