wrote this when i was feelin a bit down check it out feed it!!!!
depressed chest caved in a dark age
blood tastes great cuz its an escape
from my sparked rage inhale the smoke
from my last puff of jane fly away soul
takes me away for my personal cage purgatory
leave carnage behind rewind time can't find
whats wrong with my mind everything i touch
is vanquished so i guess i'm anxious to leave
my body anguished evaporate in thin air don't
cry when i leave or when i get there where am i
goin i stare into a mirror i shiver i'm cold my
body is floating in the river my liver shuts down
n fails my ghost wails cuz it sees how badly my
body is frail i leave entrails of feces with
everything i touch i'm fucked up don't trust i'm
too hellish u'll get burnt up severely everything
near me dissipates i try n participate but legend
has it i gotta fucked up mental state i reiterate
i live for hate disown my heart cuz whats there to
cause a spark i make my mark i shatter thoughts that
exit dark so i end my target where it starts my head
spins in 360 can't get rid of what i feel cuz i'm
empty a shell of a man u see knee deep as i creep
seap into eternal hell so i peacefully sleep feelings
are deep cuz i can't erase what i am and frankly
who said i ever gave a damn? like sam i am ask
for another round of sorrow don't have that much
time so why would i borrow? just end it forget all
of my sins i've replenished my forgiveness i'm sick
of where i had to begin it so just end it.......
Darkness
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Darkness
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Lawgix
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Re: Darkness
{claps} rough spots but it was nice i stumbled over parts here and there but i like that a lot
Re: Darkness
thanx man appreciate it... go check my flow in the writtens...
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"Sometimes You Gotta Stand By Your Failures To Recognize Your Success" Joe Budden
pest wrote:You look Easy... Whats Good?
AntiMaTTer wrote:lmao ...is this how you hit on all the chicks?
Re: Darkness
you did a good job portrayin' Darkness bruh bruh
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Re: Darkness
Lmafao! I like qz's feed haha. Naw but lawgix this was pretty tight. I was darkness for sure man. Write more poetry son
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Re: Darkness
i did have more on here but plex deleted older posts... so yeah i may repost em...
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Lawgix
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"Sometimes You Gotta Stand By Your Failures To Recognize Your Success" Joe Budden
pest wrote:You look Easy... Whats Good?
AntiMaTTer wrote:lmao ...is this how you hit on all the chicks?
Re: Darkness
Not A Bad Spit Just A Bit Sketchy.. Maybe You Needed 2 Re-word A Few Pieces In The Drop n It Woulda Been A Solid Read. But I Found The Rhythm n Followed Your Flow Which Made It A Decent Script.
What Stuck Out 2 Me Was
If So.. I'm Feelin It
What Stuck Out 2 Me Was
Is This A Smoker's Passion..? 1 of Those "Imma Smoke Till Tha Day I DIE" Type Joints Right?depressed chest caved in a dark age
blood tastes great cuz its an escape
from my sparked rage inhale the smoke
from my last puff of jane fly away soul
If So.. I'm Feelin It
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Re: Darkness
nah its a not a "smoke weed till i die"... its about being depressed...
Don't Let The Game Make U, Make Urself
Lawgix
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"Sometimes You Gotta Stand By Your Failures To Recognize Your Success" Joe Budden
Lawgix
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"Sometimes You Gotta Stand By Your Failures To Recognize Your Success" Joe Budden
pest wrote:You look Easy... Whats Good?
AntiMaTTer wrote:lmao ...is this how you hit on all the chicks?
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