Loving The Lovely.

16 Micz · Post by **16 Micz** » Sat Aug 12, 2006 4:49 am

unique characteristics, inner and outer beauty
sue me, but i just had to touch her booty
laugh unexplained,glad shes entertained
life tears you apart, the knife stares at my heart
i liked her hair, and she was smart
but i knew life with her could not start
so i guided her to the park
i can she was scared cause it was dark
the knife glared in the dark
so i...where do i start.

lol idk i just tried again pretty lame huh

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Sun Aug 13, 2006 5:52 am

lmao. Should have called it the rape, it was worth reading, but not that special 6/10.

Subsist · Post by **Subsist** » Mon Aug 14, 2006 12:39 am

I think you missed a word on line 8. It was short too.

precise · Post by **precise** » Mon Aug 21, 2006 9:31 am

ummmmm.... ?

Viral · Post by **Viral** » Mon Aug 21, 2006 10:25 am

PrecisE wrote:ummmmm.... ?

woooorrdddd......

16 Micz · Post by **16 Micz** » Mon Aug 21, 2006 12:17 pm

lmao seriously, i just wrote somethin i have no idea why i wrote this, or where it came from...

precise · Post by **precise** » Mon Aug 21, 2006 1:13 pm

haha thats cool, subliminal huh?

16 Micz · Post by **16 Micz** » Mon Aug 21, 2006 7:08 pm

yea i guess so..it isnt that bad when i read it again..

Subsist · Post by **Subsist** » Tue Aug 22, 2006 3:40 am

you wrote on line 8 "i can she was scared cause it was dark" . is it "i can see she..." cuz if its not ill have to study english again.

precise · Post by **precise** » Tue Aug 22, 2006 4:25 am

yea it was just a typo sub

Borat · Post by **Borat** » Tue Sep 12, 2006 2:45 pm

Not bad...keep going

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