Text Help 101 By Solo

Two words... rap school. Learn the craft, ask questions, be interactive. Find out what makes the technical MC's so efficient at writing, and which areas you need to improve on.

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a bar is 2 lines man but this is extremely good
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
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a lot of people seem to skip this area, for those of your that are new, this forum will help you in practically every way..quit slacking assholes, im tired of reading mediocre verses, especially when every new verse by the same person has not improved...READ THIS FUCKING SECTION
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This is good material..... imma have to read this later
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Just read everybit of that so now im going to take that advice write a peice and see how i do

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Read the entire thing. Good shit. Learned something...that's what I'm here for...learn, practice, elevate...yup

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All right, this is a big help to me. I've been writing poetry for years, and just recently I've been trying to translate that into writing hip hop lyrics. A lot of blank spots were filled in for me with this. Thank you.
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Thanks man I liked this thread helps alot and makes me learn more and elevate.
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Great read, definitely something to learn from.
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Nyz..Enjoyed D WordPlay/Similes/Metaphors Differentiation

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your appreciated for taking the time out to post this man its just cleared some shit up for me.
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"That is becuase hip hop was started by Thugs and Gangsters,"


you're ignorant as fuck, learn the history of hip hop before you go around spreading ignorance... :naughty:
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