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R3 - Tramatic vs Mac

Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 6:46 am
by complexity
8-10 bars
all the same rules apply

Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 5:33 am
by Subsist
This battle is due 3 days starting from now.
Me and Hazard are not allowed to vote.

Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 5:35 am
by drunken jesus
may the best honkey win

Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 3:56 am
by Haz
Ohh We're Not Allowed To Vote Subsist?
Why Cause We Were In Da Tourney Huh lol
Damn Dat Sucks

Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 11:38 pm
by -TraMaTiK-
"Jon-a-thin'' ur like a bad cavity,so im gonna start drillin u
tryna con-a-win but it ends in tragdey with me killin u -1
and ur justa Don-within ur own mind,but are ya willin-to
stop makin a mockery of ya self, cuz i am 'fillin' ya shoes! -2
and once u drop after me,ill check ya math and see
if u realized,u plus rap iz like 50 rappin,plain laughter b! -3
but yet u still try ta flow why tho?...OOH-I-KNOW
cuz a NET REPUTATION iz all u can get comin from Ohio! -4
but if u ever in Ny stop out,and ill clean ya rotten mouth
given u the 'lesson' u missed at school cuz u dropped out!! -5
and it juz goes ta show without school u create wack shit
cuz ya got ya facts split thinkin i suck?Naw ppl laugh when Mac spit -6
cuz u justa MSN thug son,with nothin ta back it
got all illest laughin at ya audio's like' ENOUGH PLEASE THATS IT!' -7
but are u still askin 4 more?ill keep blastin this whore
hittin ya with punches,till ur ass hits the grass-or-floor -8
splittin ya brain fast ta the core,while i piss on ya casket door -9
ull be in'a box or swimmin wit fishs,so idc if im last ta shore
cuz the fact of me killin u will 'spread' quick like a bad Rash or sore!! -10

bar 2 = he says we have like similiar styles but im juz usin that 2 state 'i can do what u do' kinda thing
bar 4 = he's from Ohio
bar 5 = he dropped outta school
bar 7 = sum ppl made negative comments bout his audio's n laughed
the rest shud b self explanatory

Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 5:26 am
by Mac
It's Smart Of You Puttin Off Bein Torn-An-Ripped,
Till After The Tournament You Was Born-A-Bitch//
You Aint A Rapper Dawg You're An Extortionist,
Thinkin You're More Advanced-With-Ya-Flow?//
Hazard Was Ya Only Chance-At-A-Vote,
So I Dismantled-That-Ho As I Attack-At-The-Throat//
Smash You An Leave You Baffled-An-Choked,
An You Can Tell You Get Upped In Stats-By-The-Post//
Cuz Truth Behold You Been Wack-From-The-Go,
I'll Smash-In-Ya-Dome An Poor Acid In The Cracks-Of-Ya-Skull//
Like Jeff-ery-Domer Tempt-Me An Ya Chest-Piece-Will-Be-A-Goner,
When The Text-Release With Perplexity-I'll-Be-Honored//
To Murder You AGAIN Like This Was The Sequal,
You're A Flake With No Brain Just A Skull Full Of Meat-Loaf//
On Hazards Dick Like You're Lovin The Deep-Throat,
Speakin Of Wich If You Ask Me Though//
In All Honesty It Was Rather Hard-To-See,
If Indeed You Was Dissin Me Or Comin On-To-Me//
Yo' That's Twice I Murdered You An I Aint Need A Gat-Or-A-Pistol,
Just Imagine A Scope Strapped-To-A-Pencil//

The First Bar Is The Only One I Think Aint As Self Explainitory As The Rest. But What I Ment Was I Thought It Was Kind Of A Bitch Move To Wait Till After The Tournament To Battle 16mics When There Was Days With Out Battling Where He Could Of Dropped.

Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 5:56 am
by -TraMaTiK-
nice drop..uppin 4 votes -1-

Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 9:18 am
by -TraMaTiK-
yup uppin 4 votes

Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 9:52 am
by Mac
Yeah What He Said ^^

Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:40 am
by complexity
Mac was better all around. If you want a more detailed vote just ask.

Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 12:29 pm
by 16 Micz
well here we go(u fags better return the favor)

Similies/Metas: Mac
Wordplay: NONE
Punches: Tramatik
Personals: Tramatik
Vocab: Mac
Flow/Structure: Mac
Entertainment: Tie
Rhyme Scheme: Mac

Overall: Mac,

Tramatik:pretty good battle from both of u guys but tramatik if u would have came more original instead of being an ordinary battler you would have had my vote but u was lacking that as well as structure and vocab cause u came pretty simplistic with the rhyming, but then again there is always a disadvantage at going first

Mac:ur verse wasnt really that impressive either but u prepared as well as well structured and ur rhyming was on point but u had very few personals or punches but luckily u stood out in the other cates which won u the battle but next time dont write a diss verse, write a battle verse...

Thank you guys for battling no return the fuckin favor or ill shit on both of u.

Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 12:49 pm
by Mac
Yeah Man, I'll Return The Favor.

2-0 Me, Uppin.

Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 3:43 pm
by Onediversekid
Similies/Metas: Mac
Wordplay: Tie
Punches: Tramatik
Personals: Mac
Vocab: Mac
Flow/Structure: Mac
Entertainment: Mac
Rhyme Scheme: Mac

OverAll I Think Mac Took This, Because Tramatik Didn't Come Hard Enough, Your Structure Was A Little Poor and Like 16 Micz Mentioned "You Were To Original With your Rhymin" Did Not Impress Me.

Good battle Though. Keep Doing ya Thing.

Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 2:17 am
by Subsist
Congratiolations to Mac he won the tourny.. AND YOUR PRIZE IS....................................ONE WHOLE DOLLAR!!!ta daaaaa daaaaaaaaaaaa

-records updated-