R3 - Tramatic vs Mac

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R3 - Tramatic vs Mac

Post by complexity » Fri Jan 05, 2007 6:46 am

8-10 bars
all the same rules apply

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Post by Subsist » Tue Jan 09, 2007 5:33 am

This battle is due 3 days starting from now.
Me and Hazard are not allowed to vote.

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Post by drunken jesus » Tue Jan 09, 2007 5:35 am

may the best honkey win
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by Haz » Wed Jan 10, 2007 3:56 am

Ohh We're Not Allowed To Vote Subsist?
Why Cause We Were In Da Tourney Huh lol
Damn Dat Sucks
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Post by -TraMaTiK- » Wed Jan 10, 2007 11:38 pm

"Jon-a-thin'' ur like a bad cavity,so im gonna start drillin u
tryna con-a-win but it ends in tragdey with me killin u -1
and ur justa Don-within ur own mind,but are ya willin-to
stop makin a mockery of ya self, cuz i am 'fillin' ya shoes! -2
and once u drop after me,ill check ya math and see
if u realized,u plus rap iz like 50 rappin,plain laughter b! -3
but yet u still try ta flow why tho?...OOH-I-KNOW
cuz a NET REPUTATION iz all u can get comin from Ohio! -4
but if u ever in Ny stop out,and ill clean ya rotten mouth
given u the 'lesson' u missed at school cuz u dropped out!! -5
and it juz goes ta show without school u create wack shit
cuz ya got ya facts split thinkin i suck?Naw ppl laugh when Mac spit -6
cuz u justa MSN thug son,with nothin ta back it
got all illest laughin at ya audio's like' ENOUGH PLEASE THATS IT!' -7
but are u still askin 4 more?ill keep blastin this whore
hittin ya with punches,till ur ass hits the grass-or-floor -8
splittin ya brain fast ta the core,while i piss on ya casket door -9
ull be in'a box or swimmin wit fishs,so idc if im last ta shore
cuz the fact of me killin u will 'spread' quick like a bad Rash or sore!! -10

bar 2 = he says we have like similiar styles but im juz usin that 2 state 'i can do what u do' kinda thing
bar 4 = he's from Ohio
bar 5 = he dropped outta school
bar 7 = sum ppl made negative comments bout his audio's n laughed
the rest shud b self explanatory

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Post by Mac » Thu Jan 11, 2007 5:26 am

It's Smart Of You Puttin Off Bein Torn-An-Ripped,
Till After The Tournament You Was Born-A-Bitch//
You Aint A Rapper Dawg You're An Extortionist,
Thinkin You're More Advanced-With-Ya-Flow?//
Hazard Was Ya Only Chance-At-A-Vote,
So I Dismantled-That-Ho As I Attack-At-The-Throat//
Smash You An Leave You Baffled-An-Choked,
An You Can Tell You Get Upped In Stats-By-The-Post//
Cuz Truth Behold You Been Wack-From-The-Go,
I'll Smash-In-Ya-Dome An Poor Acid In The Cracks-Of-Ya-Skull//
Like Jeff-ery-Domer Tempt-Me An Ya Chest-Piece-Will-Be-A-Goner,
When The Text-Release With Perplexity-I'll-Be-Honored//
To Murder You AGAIN Like This Was The Sequal,
You're A Flake With No Brain Just A Skull Full Of Meat-Loaf//
On Hazards Dick Like You're Lovin The Deep-Throat,
Speakin Of Wich If You Ask Me Though//
In All Honesty It Was Rather Hard-To-See,
If Indeed You Was Dissin Me Or Comin On-To-Me//
Yo' That's Twice I Murdered You An I Aint Need A Gat-Or-A-Pistol,
Just Imagine A Scope Strapped-To-A-Pencil//

The First Bar Is The Only One I Think Aint As Self Explainitory As The Rest. But What I Ment Was I Thought It Was Kind Of A Bitch Move To Wait Till After The Tournament To Battle 16mics When There Was Days With Out Battling Where He Could Of Dropped.
B E Z ~

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Post by -TraMaTiK- » Thu Jan 11, 2007 5:56 am

nice drop..uppin 4 votes -1-

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Post by -TraMaTiK- » Thu Jan 11, 2007 9:18 am

yup uppin 4 votes

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Post by Mac » Thu Jan 11, 2007 9:52 am

Yeah What He Said ^^
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Post by complexity » Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:40 am

Mac was better all around. If you want a more detailed vote just ask.

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Post by 16 Micz » Thu Jan 11, 2007 12:29 pm

well here we go(u fags better return the favor)

Similies/Metas: Mac
Wordplay: NONE
Punches: Tramatik
Personals: Tramatik
Vocab: Mac
Flow/Structure: Mac
Entertainment: Tie
Rhyme Scheme: Mac

Overall: Mac,

Tramatik:pretty good battle from both of u guys but tramatik if u would have came more original instead of being an ordinary battler you would have had my vote but u was lacking that as well as structure and vocab cause u came pretty simplistic with the rhyming, but then again there is always a disadvantage at going first

Mac:ur verse wasnt really that impressive either but u prepared as well as well structured and ur rhyming was on point but u had very few personals or punches but luckily u stood out in the other cates which won u the battle but next time dont write a diss verse, write a battle verse...

Thank you guys for battling no return the fuckin favor or ill shit on both of u.

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Post by Mac » Thu Jan 11, 2007 12:49 pm

Yeah Man, I'll Return The Favor.

2-0 Me, Uppin.
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Post by Onediversekid » Thu Jan 11, 2007 3:43 pm

Similies/Metas: Mac
Wordplay: Tie
Punches: Tramatik
Personals: Mac
Vocab: Mac
Flow/Structure: Mac
Entertainment: Mac
Rhyme Scheme: Mac


OverAll I Think Mac Took This, Because Tramatik Didn't Come Hard Enough, Your Structure Was A Little Poor and Like 16 Micz Mentioned "You Were To Original With your Rhymin" Did Not Impress Me.

Good battle Though. Keep Doing ya Thing.

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Post by Subsist » Fri Jan 12, 2007 2:17 am

Congratiolations to Mac he won the tourny.. AND YOUR PRIZE IS....................................ONE WHOLE DOLLAR!!!ta daaaaa daaaaaaaaaaaa

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